A game is being played. A dreadful, chaotic foe decided to leave a lasting impression. Now, anything with the power or ability to bridge dimensions is dropping a champion in or around Equestria. In the incomprehensible mess of rules enforced, the first is the clearest - the champion had to once be human.
Of course, even the best laid plans fail. When you rip open pathways between dimensions, stuff you didn't want is going to fall through.
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This is very good. I wub this.
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Haha, thank you. It's the first thing I've written that I've actually put out to the public, so I'd love to hear critiques. Hopefully i'm not over-explaining.
The one glaring error is that griffins are slavers. In cannon CGotG griffins are an endangered preindustrial race of slaves. NOT slavers.
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Where did I mention that? Although there ARE some slaver griffins but besides the point. I shouldn't have mentioned anything like that...
HERP. I see my error. Fixed'd
No offense, but this confuses the hell out of me. Did his mind get split into two people?
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Yes
2727250 oh. OK, then.
Always good to see another CGotG fic.
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Some would disagree. I just want to make sure I'm doing something interesting and at least somewhat original.
Poor Aurora now all she has is Boots.
But on a better note, yay Boots did something useful... Kinda.
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Useful? Well, no worries. He'll be useless for a while yet.
I'm glad the interesting character is the one I made up. That makes me feel better about this
you kinda messed up the song, unless it's a version I haven't heard before...
it reminded me of a scratched CD
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I couldn't find the CD version, so I had to make do with a live one.
Shadow of the Colossus, much?
I await the next chapter.
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I see the parallel but I've never actually had the chance to play it. I own the game and, as with many I own, have yet to actually play it. This bothers me from time to time.
As for the next chapter, it is in pre-reading process.
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Honesty, I haven't played it either. However, of the limited knowladge of the game I have, you have to defeat the Colossus' by climbing up their bodies and attacking their weak points, which may-or-may-not be on top of their heads. Sound familiar?
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Oh I does have the knowing. It certainly wasn't in my head when i wrote the scene though.
8 hours + 10 hours + 5 hours = 23 hours. What happened with the other hour?
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I ate it. it was delicious. Like strawberries.
P.S. thanks for pointing that out. Fixeded
Interesting theories. I await further updates to this little gem. Sorry, bad pun. I couldn't resist.
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Du dun CHI
New chapters are being worked on as i type.
Not a single comment here? wtf.
Looks promising anyway. I'll have read everything by tomorrow I think.
3229475Huzzah! i guess i'm just not that interesting. I'm working on it.
Mr. Qwinkle: Best character in the CGotG universe.
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oh you
I picture this guy as looking like this without the arms: null.
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Haha, oh you. I actually do have some cover art coming down the line though it might be a while.
How does he wave? How does he wave? HOW DOES HE WAVE?!
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he waves with magic
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Oh. That makes sense.
I just hope Boots doesn't eat Cheese... then again; that might work.
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Tsun Tsun
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Dere dere.
Much Tsundere
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Om nom nom.
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Those are my favorite! 8D
Nice one bro
mustn't. make. additional. pylons. joke.
[crystals are too cool]
Well, I guess he would be considered dead by now
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Close enough
OH GOD RIGHT IN THE FEELS *insert funny feels picture or gif*
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Rule #1: You, the author, do NOT talk to the readers directly out of the Author's notes. Delete these parentheses. Only a character so meta he knows he has readers has the right to say that. Yours does not know that.
If you want to tell people about this manga and this mod, do so in the author's notes.Otherwise, you break the story's flow and you even incite your readers to stop reading in order to search for these things.
NOW KISSU~!
The plot thickens.
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I am proud to say I have yet to include any commentary on the plots of ponies
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Get your mind out of the gutter, good sir. I was talking about the story.
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Shhhh, it's okay. Just let it happen
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I am letting it happen.
Turns out, I WAS THE PLOT, ALL ALONG!
Protip: sarcastic comments equals me.
Also, you miss an uppercase on "now".