This is a conjunction of six stories where the mane six get teleported away and are completely alone. Each must survive different periods of being lost, how will they fare?
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Wow. Talk about insanely short. And Applejack's section is only four sentences long. I've read greentext stories longer than that.
You seriously need to go back and flesh this more, because your hook for the reader (which is nonexistent) is terrible. You just talk about their surroundings, maybe offer commentary from the characters, and then... what? That's it?
Oh, and this:
Really? REALLY?
Not a bad chapter to be honest.
A good bit of mistakes, but they don't take away from the story. I'm interested in seeing what happens next though.
2625860 heh, sorry about the error, fixed it thanks. And everything they go through is for the up and coming chapters, this was they wake up and go "BUCK" at where they are. Except Applejack, I have something special planed for her. Poor A.J.