Genesis is a pegasus well known as an explorer and researcher of ancient human ruins. His goal is to understand everything the humans knew and did before going extinct. While exploring a new found ancient structure Genesis soon learns more than he ever needed to know...
The wheels are set in motion and Genesis is ready to start on a journey through a working bunker made by humans of the old times. The events that are about to unfold unto him will change his life forever and Equestria as well. Because the true answer to some of life's greatest mysteries are a tragic reward.
Chapters (5)
Good story. But if I were to make a list of errors, my head would explode. You should get Blink on that one, because I don't have the editing skills to fix it. All in all, it is a great prelude to the zany adventure that will likely decide the fate of the world... And my OC is sooo fucked.
this kind of feels like a point and click adventure
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That's great to know Blue Lightning and yes after many error fixes it will be a lot better but I just needed it to be there first if anything. I loved writing this story because I got to express something I feel is deep true understanding. Oh and yes.
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Oh yea haha funny story that's originally what it was back when I had it in a composition book 2 years ago. Nice to meet you by the way.
I will always be improving I'm only human after all haha. I think everyone has a shot at doing whatever they want, as long as its legal lol.
3221254 ha i don't get that often on the internet, it's nice to meet you. probably
Im hooked.
~nightmare
3218757 i give it a sold 9.4/10 you will earn that ten when you finish the story... also some verrrryyy slight hiccups on words :P
~Nightmare.
3221737 god damn that was amazing...are we getting anymore? and also
Without nothing
without nothing the out should not be their...it should be i lived with nothing and no one..not without nothing...thats redundant
~Nightmare
3223571 Yes I am creating a story to continue this along with some other writers that I know that are aiding me on my need to ever improve my grammar. Thank you though I plan to write a lot more. Oh and I made the correction thank you it does sound a lot better.
Good news the working of the sequel has begun so now all that enjoyed this story will get an amazing conclusion. I don't have a release date set because the outline has it so its going to take awhile but I guarantee it to arrive.
Reminds me of Dead Space 3
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Hey I got a little bit of ideas from that game hehe.
Well damn, this was pretty good