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Hmm, seems Alexia isn't the only one with mental barrier problems. It seems Loki actually does have a conscience after all! ;p
At this point in the day, if I remember correctly, the meteor should have become meteorite by now, right? I fully expect there to be more to the rock than just rock's sake. Not just it magical protection either.
I find it interesting how the book already registers Alexia as having a true pony soul, I mean, physical appearance usually doesn't revamp the soul in that manner, so it almost seems as though Alexia may have been pony all along! Still, the second half of the key will be interesting enough to obtain...
Keep going! ;)
Oh, and not to mention... First! :p
i love your take on the mlp fandom ive never read a story from this angle before though i can see discord doing something like this just for shits and gigs. great story and im looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Can you change the rating to mature now? Because Tune and Conrad clearly had sex in this chapter and I'm pretty sure this is far from the teen rating at all.
Hopefully I was wrong in thinking that the book just stopped there when the Tome said that only Twilight can unlock the next chapter and that he can still look at the other chapters and ignore the Dusk Night pages... oh right, I suppose I should stop referring to that person as a "him" after this chapter.
This chapter seemed to consist mostly of Loki trying to force Conrad and James to have sex with each other, while to me, it seems like the two don't even want it. It was painful to read this sex scene, and while i realize i could have skipped it any time i wished, i really don't want to miss anything with this story, because it seems to throw a lot of information at you that looks important, but may end up just there to look pretty, which can get a bit confusing since there haven't been many answer's here, and more and more questions are just piling up.
So, at the beginning, once more we see Loki getting reprimanded by James for her pranks, which if she really were sorry for she would stop doing that kind of stuff, which i don't believe will ever happen. Plus, I don't find that upsetting the humans will be a good idea. I mean... blowing up a school. Really? That's the best you could come up with? While it's sadly sort of true what she said about it (oh the teen years...), it's nothing you want to admit in the open or act upon. I have a feeling Loki might just be psychotic under all that energy, considering her past and her needs as well...
And once more, you got me feeling sorry for her, only to have me hate her again later in the chapter. You seem to be good at doing that, and it's really irking me. But, you know? Who COULDN'T dislike her after what she did this chapter? While James believes that he wants to break that mental barrier in his head, i have a feeling he really doesn't no matter how hard he tries to deny it. Loki is really being invasive with these issues, and i don't feel she's helping the awkward couple out at all. If, you can call them a couple...
James's conscience was the kicker here, though. It was awful seeing him struggle with himself, just to force himself to have sex. That can't be healthy.
That 10% man in James i have a feeling is going to die off quickly. I just can't stop expressing my sadness to see this transformation of a character i once loved, but now dislike just as much as the others. It's a bit heartbreaking, honestly . I kinda grew attached to the fella. And, while i did know the transformation coming, nothing could have prepared me for THIS. And to see him want to finally turn all mare just nails the coffin shut on that scruffy, average man...
On the bright to all this, at least Conrad had the courtesy to tell her she didn't have to do it, and was even hesitant before he ejaculated inside her. But apparently James knows more about ponies and horses than them all, and apparently the heat cycle still applies to them. So, i guess pregnancy can wait... Heh, I'll bet she'll be pregnant by Chapter 16. So, hey, bumped you up a few notches there Conrad. *Sigh* Still. Freaking Loki.
On the rather grim side, the meteor is gonna touchdown soon!
Oh god, i hope my friend was right when he said all it'll make is a splash, and not a super tsunami that'll wreck the pacific and islands and maybe Japan, i dunno. Here's to hoping humanity will be fine on that part, before the Aliens do something bad.
Onto the next chapter... cautiously...
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Really? Okay, now, Alex, protip - the mind throws up barriers _for a reason_. The reason may not be logical, but the mind does it to _protect itself_. Barrelling through them like that _can't_ be good for you. I seem to recall you made a mental note to keep an eye out for mental changes made to you? I think a sexuality reversal sort've counts, there. And actively forcing the issue isn't good.
I'm sorry, but whilst Alex has, until now, been tolerant beyond the bounds of all reason, now she's just being stupid. For one thing, she raised a very good point before she got blackmailed into this - when _you_ are still in the process of sorting out your issues, actively involving other people _isn't fair_.
For another - yes, she was right about the equine diet. But that was backed up by evidence from the book. So she has _no_ grounds to make comparisons between a horse's reproductive cycle, and that of _talking, technicolour, thaumatological ponies from an alternate dimnension_!
Everyone seems to agree that they don't need further complications right now - anyone who has ever had any experience at life knows sexual relationships _abound_ with potential complications. Many of which result in 'never interacting again' - something they _can't_ afford to do for the foreseeable future!
As I say, I'm sorry, because I really liked James' character - and now you are actively trying to kill whatever remains of it.
As for Loki - no. She has been completely intolerable, and utterly remorseless for quite some time. And, considering her past behaviour (Texas chilli bowl, unwilling victim), it is _perfectly_ conceivable that she would trick Conrad into basically raping Alex, so her indignance there is so completely unjustifiable it practically infuriates me. I mean, this coming from a person who has only started to feel guilty after launching explosives at a building which is typically full of children, and which they did not know to be unoccupied, and after hospitalising two people by effectively yelling 'fire' in a crowded restaurant?
I suppose it is gratifying to know she _does_ have a conscience, and so is not, perhaps, a _complete_ monster. But, if it were possible for me, her actions would actually render her _beneath_ contempt. I've _trodden_ in things I have more respect for than I currently do for her.
so so we progress into the valley of clop.
nice, but pretty mature chapter.
hadn't have. Or had not have. Or just "had not"
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While most seem to be focused on the more mature side of things, I am going to put the light on something I noticed in the later half of the chapter..it appears that you have quite the alternate world setting setup, if I am reading this correctly it appears there was a bit of a regime change back in Equestria since the book mentions Summer of 5 RoL. I can only go so far as to guess that means Princess Luna is in charge now...so with that thought in mind....wheres Princess Celestia?
UPDATE: It's come to mind that it might also mean 'Return of Luna', in which case things would be heading in a different direction entirely.
Came for the clop, Stayed for the plot
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FINISH HER!!!
I'm not so sure i would personally end up with the logic of straight guy -> straight mare. I don't think i would suddenly decide to pursue guys if my dick evaporated one day. Has no one here considered trying out lesbianism?
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Agreed? But it's not my logic. I would think if I suddenly sprouted a penis, I'd probably be into men than women.
... But then again, I am bi... so it's likely to be up in the air more than that...
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FATALITY!!!
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Makes me imagine a legitimate Mortal Kombat finisher and my gods is that odd.
This is the Strangest Sex I've ever listened to
On to the Next Chapter!