A unicorn with no talents is thrust into the largest armed conflict in Equestrian history. Destiny may await him on the field of battle, but is it better to have no talent than the talent of ending other ponies lives?
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Really enjoying this story. Keep it up!
I'm kinda surprised this story doesn't have more likes. It's good stuff.
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thanks to both of you, glad you enjoy it.
Just keeps getting better, can't wait to see where it goes from here!
10/10 cant wait for more
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thanks for joining the steady stream of people who think this is pretty great!
A great work of fiction. needs more featuring.
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Needs more featuring? Has it ever been featured?
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Pretty certain that is how I found it I think?
Just finished reading the entire story in it's current form this week. I hate to say it but your story is going into my favorites list just because of how good the story is in general. Keep it up because I can't wait till the next chapter.
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I can't wait for the next chapter either, and am glad that you like the story. however, I am moving halfway across the country in a week and a half, so you will have to wait a little for the next chapter.
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That's ok I'm known for patience so take as long as you need as some content creators say quality over quantity.
I've finished reading Manifest Destiny and It's wonderful. How character grow, Equestria that you portray, reasons why Celestia just doesn't up and obliterate Unicornia. I feel that it's believable and possible to happen in the original show's portrayed world too.
Some action and reaction of the character is especially resonate for me like after breakdown, it's not "Are you okay?" but a utilitarian "Can you work?" and how Cold Blooded react after the mg-ditch thing. I cried men, I cried. That scene also almost made me throw up not from gore but how horrifying it's must be for Cold Blooded.
Also details like 200mm gun is worse than mage, the bomf of SMCC, and the progression of war. I especially like how you attributed the gun to the gryphon. I think your amount of detail that is always present and how you intersperse it in a little chunk in the story shows that the world is alive and progressing. You've not only make living characters but also a living world. Something that only a handful of written fic accomplish in my opinion.
Your amount of effort is showing both in quality and time between chapters. Take your time! Re-reading previous chapter is entertaining here.
The only problem
iswas the spelling and grammar.8026670
Thank you Darthvendar for enabling me to use past tense in previous sentences. It means a lot.
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Oh yeah it'd been featured. Congratulations.
I think I've praised too much. I'm in awfully good mood right now. I am just a novice so please take my opinion in stride and a handful amount of salt.
Lastly thank you! Reading this tale makes me appreciative and happy for the peace and mundane that I have in my country.
TNR
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thanks for the kind words! gotta say that they mean a lot to me, and I'm glad that you and many others enjoy this story as much as you do.
as to the amount of effort that I put into the story, I'd love to say that all of that goes into the quality of the finished product, but more often than not the amount of time between chapters is more a result of me, say, trying to get a chicken dinner in PUBG or grinding the British battleship line in World of warships than me writing. it's a personal fault of mine.
but, good news, the initial draft of this next chapter is done, and I'm passing it to my editor now.
again, thanks for the words.
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Oh yeah!
WoWs, free to play, grind to win. #Noregret!