Great chapter!

4054226 why TY good sir.

In my opinion, the cavalry general should be executed. He disobeyed a direct order from a superior officer. Where are the commissars when you need them?
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believe me, it was hard to resist the urge. if you make a good enough argument I could be persuaded to do a rewrite

If I were Ace, he would not have survived 10 seconds. Court martial or death. Preferably both.