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The Equestrian Gentlecolt 830158

Joined October 2011
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    The Equestrian Gentlecolt's Stories (8)

    • Perfect For Me
      Twilight Sparkle clones herself to make more time for her friends, but just gets more distracted.

      21,530 words · 14,989 views · 1,515 likes · 28 dislikes
    • A Perfectly Ordinary Day in Ponyville
      Twilight Sparkle goes about business as usual in Ponyville.
      4,582 words · 26,194 views · 784 likes · 21 dislikes
    • The LUNA Project
      A science fiction origin story. An alicorn foal awakens alone in an abandoned world.
      21,214 words · 3,123 views · 222 likes · 6 dislikes
    • Ponies Visit McDonald's
      Ponies arrive at McDonald's, cause chaos, leave, in 1.2k words.
      1,228 words · 1,720 views · 107 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Becoming Alicorn
      1,620 words · 1,434 views · 93 likes · 2 dislikes
    • A Very Special Day in Canterlot
      1,133 words · 471 views · 59 likes · 1 dislikes
    • My Little Roommate
      4,783 words · 1,778 views · 37 likes · 0 dislikes
    • Guilty as Charged
      6,677 words · 844 views · 91 likes · 13 dislikes

    Twilight Sparkle just can't find enough time in the day. She has to study friendship for the Princess, hang out with her five friends, and juggle her own hobbies and interests besides. But when a novel solution presents itself in the form of an experimental new spell, will it solve her time crunch, or will she be distracted even further?

    First Published
    16th Feb 2012
    Last Modified
    2nd Feb 2013

    Comments ( 861 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Now this is intriguing . . . I think I'll watch.

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Neat concept. I'm looking forward to seeing how this pans out.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh my, now this is a very intriguing concept. Shall track this one.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    lol

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · 1 · ·
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    Now your thinking with ponies.

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Colour me intrigued. Tracked.

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · 1 · ·
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    Simple spike. You're not supposed to clean up them. Equestria isn't made for two of any of the mane cast. Now I suggest you get your life affairs in order before equestria explodes from Twilight Sparklyness

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · 1 · ·
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    Clonemance?

    OH MY GAWD YES

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Does... does she fall in love... with *herself* in this story? :rainbowhuh: This is labelled as a romance comedy, and the picture for this fic is Twilight smiling and blushing at herself and... you know what, I'll just track this and wait. :twilightblush:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    :yay:

    *track*

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    tracked and stuff awesome story

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    How could I not follow this story? :rainbowlaugh:

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh, Twilight.

    Everyone knows cloning yourself will only double your troubles. :facehoof::twilightblush:

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I've seen enough internet to know where this is going...

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Doppelgänger time.... Olé! :trollestia: I wonder whether Spike will approve...

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I'm liking this idea...very...very...very...much.:moustache:

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh god, this can't be good  :twilightsmile: + :twilightsheepish: = :facehoof: for :ajbemused::fluttershysad::pinkiehappy::rainbowhuh::raritywink:

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Wow, this is a new one. Got to see how this turns out

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Umm... okay, this will be... interesting. Tracking.

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    SHIT JUST GOT REAL!!!

    color me interested and call me applebloom

    keep em coming

    and i will keep reading

    that is all

    kthanxbai

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yeah, I'm gonna haft to see where this is going to go...

    One Twilight is enough to render all of Ponyville into a state of utter lunacy. Two of them :SHUDDER:

    I feel for Spike. It might be time to take that one-hundred year nap. Perhaps by then, Equestria will have survived.

    Keep it up!

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>227443 I've seen enough naruto to know where this is going.

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Now the first thing the Twilights need to do is decide which one gets to watch the astronomical event and which one has to attend the party.  That... might be difficult to sort out if neither is clearly the primary version...

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Wouldn't the mirrors have to be facing inward for her to see her reflection from inside the circle?

    ΔΓ

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    OMC this IS going to be good. Twitwi.

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Tracked for the possible narcissism that may ensue.

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is going to be delicious...:pinkiehappy:

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>225879

    That didn't take long. :trollestia:

    >>227443

    I love that comic. While it wasn't what set me off writing this, it definitely played some part in the story's conception.

    >>227717

    The mirrors were in the exact center facing outward, she was inside the circle with them, facing toward them. My wording there might need a little more revision.

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    31st :moustache:

                                                  lol:rainbowlaugh:

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    You have my attention.

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    All right lets do this! TTTTWWWWIIIIILLLLIIIGGGHHHHTTT SSSSPPPPAAAARRRRRKKKKLLLLLEEEE!!!!


    What now Leeroy?

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I wonder, has she worked out how to merge together again? And does the spell have any side effects?

    But these questions are irrelavent before the double fun that appears to be comming. :twilightsmile:

    #35 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    this is going to get funny:trixieshiftright::trixieshiftleft:

    #36 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    the doorbell joke made me laugh, i like where this story is going stressed out Twilight is always good

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #38 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is greatness. Tracking.

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    See title, read description

    "Hmm...curious. I'll give it a read."

    Read

    "Two Twilight Sparkles...TRACKED"

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>227666 >>226137

    It is not like she cloned :pinkiehappy: or any thing.

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>227938

    In this case, our hero has in fact thought her cunning plan all the way through. :twilightsmile: At least as far as the spell goes. No guarantees on the social aspects...

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I think I see where this be going......Tracking and liked :twilightsmile:

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>228111

    Though if she plans to submit her research to begin working towards earning her own shelf in the Royal Library she will need to answer those questions, but that can wait till later.

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    *puts on shades* This is gonna be good.

    ...but man, I can't read this with the shades on. *takes them off*

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    You have my interest, good sir!  Tracking.

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I'd never thought about shipping Twilight Sparkle with Twilight Sparkle... NOW I HAVE! :twilightsmile:

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I love this.

    SO MUCH.

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :twilightoops:

    Oh dear...

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I'm gonna go find a a doll house cause I have felling there are going to be a lot of

    (puts on sunglasses)

    Sparkles floating around.

    YYEEEAAAAHHHHH

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Alternet version:

    Somepony call Buffy

    (puts on sunglasses)

    cause I just got a double dose of Twilight

    YYEEEAAAAHHHHH

    Twilight:facehoof: what a terrible series.

    #51 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    So between simply asking her friends to reschedule, and going into the realms of dangerous, mad superscience, Twilight picks the one that allows her to clone herself.

    DOES OCCEM'S RAZOR NOT EXIST IN THIS UNIVERSE?!?

    #52 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    The Twilight has been doubled! :yay:

    #53 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    hmm very interesting. The mirrors were setup in a triangle pattern and she enters at the "base" of the triangle and appears coming out of both angles. This means that technically to reverse the process the 2 of her would have to enter 2 of the mirrors at the same time while hopefully a single Twilight comes out of the third mirror.

    A very interesting spell that could lead to a LOT of trouble if their timing is off...theoretically anyway. I do so enjoy dealing with magical theory and application. I can't wait to see how this will fold out.

    #54 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>228524 Brony, this is Twilight Sparkle.

    Trackedtrackedtrackedtrackedtracked

    #55 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    yell, now thye must fuck, fight to the death, or both (but not necessarily in that order)

    #56 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>228524 Of course it does... What do you think Twilight used to split herself :twilightsheepish:

    ps It's occam's razor, my inner Sparkle couldn't let that go

    #57 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Either this is going to end really well, or really badly. :rainbowhuh:

    THERE IS NO MIDDLE GROUND!

    #58 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Uh-oh!

    I'm now very interested in seeing how this will progress... :twilightblush:

    #59 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    So when can we expect an update?

    #60 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Awesome-est story that I've read, and will track and stuff. :yay:

    Eh, neato story dude. Dunno what to really say since it's 6 AM right now :pinkiesick:

    #61 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    #62 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    oh this will be good... let's just hope the twi's don't get in a pranking mood. :twilightoops:

    #63 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    As a Clone myself, I'm very interested to see where you're going with this. Also with the astrological event, within 50 kilometers of each other? It doesn't sound right. My room mate is an astronomer so I'll ask him about it later and see if it is possible without the planet being REALLY messed up.

    #64 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>228524

    Twilight's Razor: The solution which involves the most books is usually the correct one.

    >>228758

    At least once a week, if the fickle friend known as inspiration is willing to cooperate.

    >>228873

    Twilight Sparkle, pull pranks? Never! :trixieshiftright:

    >>228878

    Within 50km of being aligned in a straight line, not of each other. I'd love input from your roommate though. I totally produced that event from my hindquarters, he can probably suggest something that would sound more realistic to someone with knowledge on the subject.

    #65 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Awesome story. Tracked and...thumbed up.

    #66 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Very good introduction! It didn't feel rushed at all, and it sets the stage perfectly! Can't wait for more! :rainbowkiss:

    #67 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I really never thought Twilight capable of narcissism... but hell, it looks like a fun story :twilightsmile:

    #68 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>228558

    Or the spell is not meant to be reversed, and they will sync up using the memory spell from Season 2 Episode 2.

    >>229092

    But then she never met herself in this manner before...

    #69 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I unquestionably and wholeheartedly ship every person with themselves or a time clone of themselves or an alternate gendered clone of themselves from another reality, WHATEVER WORKS.  Being a narcissist myself, I wholeheartedly believe that noone can love you more than yourself.

    #70 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>227443 I'm with spike here. This can't end well! :pinkiegasp:

    #71 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>229434

    Spike was expecting sexytimes. It already didn't end well.

    #72 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>229330

    You left out non-gender bent counterpart from another deminsion.

    #73 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh, thank you so much! As if my "tracking" page isn't long enough already! :facehoof:

    :pinkiehappy:

    No, but seriously, I'm very interested in seeing where you go with this, and you've done a great job capturing Twilight's personality. As a major Twilight Sparkle fan, that's critical to me! Good job so far, five star... er... a thumbs up for you! :yay:

    #75 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I... am curious. You win a track.:twilightsmile:

    #76 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Tracking. This is going to be amazing!:pinkiehappy:

    #77 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Tracking. I'm intrigued.

    #78 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I know this can only end in untold levels of destruction. Absolutely amazing, incredibly beautiful destruction. :twilightsmile:

    #79 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Tracking, tracking, and tracking. I can only track it with one of me though, so that's all. I loved how you made the two Sparkles react to one-another. Really interesting though, I'll be waiting for what happens next.

    #80 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>227717

    It's magic: the author doesn't need to justify it, just make it look cool!

    #81 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >“Well, what about asking them to have the party at the library? It could be a... planet alignment watching party?”

    That sounds like a fantastic idea! :twilightsmile:

    Wait...

    ...

    ...

    #82 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Very interesting concept. And...watching.

    #83 · Chapter 1 · 66w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Interesting so far!

    #84 · Chapter 1 · 65w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>227443 Lol, genius ^_^

    Anyway great first chapter, I look forward to reading more.

    Only one image can truly sum up how awesome this first chapter was...

    #85 · Chapter 1 · 65w, 4d ago · · ·
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    >>236160

    You know your brofist is awesome when it cause a sphere of destuction

    #86 · Chapter 1 · 65w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>228901 By that logic, all her problems are solved via beatings delivered via a sack full of dictionaries.

    Okay, I need fanart of that, stat...

    #87 · Chapter 1 · 65w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>246826

    Talk about throwing the book at them...

    #88 · Chapter 1 · 65w, 3d ago · · ·
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    >>246826

    So in other words... a barbarian solves problems by applying force, while a librarian solves them by applying force via book?

    Q.E.D. Librarians are literate barbians when it comes to resolving issues. :trollestia:

    Nah. :rainbowlaugh:

    #89 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Also, bonus content! I wanted to share some stuff that got left on the cutting room floor while I was writing the previous chapter, and this seemed like as good a place as any. The backstory here is that I originally starting writing Perfect For Me in a similar style to A Perfectly Ordinary Day in Ponyville, but I ended up changing it up before I published that first chapter. I realized that while that style may have worked for a satire, a romantic comedy would be better told with a significantly less meandering, and slightly more serious, tone. The silly footnotes in particular had to go, no matter how much fun I had writing them. (For those of you who really liked that style, don't worry. You'll see it again if/when I do a sequel to Ordinary Day.) Here are some of the juicier bits that never made it.


    Nor was it in the chaotic state of disarray that resulted, with alarming regularity, from the passage of a certain seven-colored speedster with no concept of the difference between "library" and "obstacle course".¹

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    ¹ Actually, Rainbow Dash was quite familiar with the difference. In a library, there was someone else to reset the obstacles if you tagged one on the way through.


    In fact, the little dragon noticed, her left eye had just started twitching. That meant it was probably time to make himself scarce.¹

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    ¹ Since she had first been introduced to Pinkie Pie, Twilight had been unconsciously developing something of a Pinkie Sense of her own. Much like Pinkie's original form of precognition, which warned her when something of note was about to happen, Twilight's Pinkie Sense warned her when Pinkie was about to happen.


    Each of the last three words was emphasized by Twilight’s eyes becoming wider, her face inching closer to her trembling assistant, and another piece of her mane throwing itself into disarray.¹

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    ¹ Localized sympathetic psychokinesis. All ponies, unicorn or not, exert a certain amount of unconscious influence on their environment. The effect is most visible in the mane of a pony undergoing an intensely emotional moment.


    Despite the apparently idyllic nature of Equestria, there existed within its borders a fair number of hazards to its inhabitants. A group of scholars in a previous century, after quite a bit of effort and no small amount of personal risk, published a comprehensive list of these perils, arranged from most to least dangerous. The first two were locked safely in the Royal Vault under Canterlot Castle. The third could only be found deep within the Everfree Forest, and only on the day after a new moon. The fourth was a gifted unicorn with a brilliant idea.¹

    Twilight Sparkle was an extremely gifted unicorn.

    Book Fort Alpha was reassembled in a matter of minutes, and the library was once again filled with the furious scratching of a quill on paper. Notes were taken, references were crosschecked, and time was all but forgotten as the lavender filly dived into her study with a frantic zeal.

    Spike, for his part, was just happy that the crazed unicorn had gone back to her studying, and he resumed his usual duties of acquiring books, scrolls, and new pots of coffee as needed. He failed to notice that the requests had changed from things like “Great Astrological Events in the 24th Year of the Ram” to titles such as “An Outsider’s View of the Pony Ego” and “How Not to Perform Advanced Metaphysical Manipulation”. If he had noticed, he probably wouldn’t have understood the significance of the change. If he had realized the significance, he probably wouldn’t have looked back on his way out of the library.

    Twilight Sparkle had a brilliant idea.

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    ¹The fifth was “Daisy Droplet’s cooking”, referring to the wife of one of the researchers. There had been some debate in the intervening years over whether the document truly represented the proper application of scientific rigor.

    #90 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh how you spoil me gentlecolt, my birthday isn't for at least another 287 days.

    #91 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    And mine's not for another 347!

    Anyways, I'm liking where this is headed. More antics, and, I'm hoping, for maybe four Twilight's, with 1/4 of the magical power but all of the figure :twilightblush:

    Also;

    >seemed to be an endless font of activity

    I'm guessing you meant fountain, and maybe you can fix it before anypony else reads it. Cheers!

    #92 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Nice.  Despite the lack of magic, this has potential.  Such as:

    She learned magic.  She evolved.  There are many copies.  Some even think they are the real Twilight Sparkle!

    :twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightoops::twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

    ΔΓ

    #93 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>249716

    I'm pretty sure "font" is legitimate, but it's obscure at best. I struggled with that bit. "Fountain" sounds too literal in my head. Actually... "wellspring" might work. Thanks for bringing it up!

    #94 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>249730 font is quite legitimate, but wellspring reads better

    #95 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    ... ooookay a twi/twi shipping could be awkward... i wonder what's in the box

    #96 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Awesome second chapter. Please write more very VERY soon!

    #97 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    I have to say, I was a little shocked at Twilight getting... 'interested' in herself...

    I guess that makes Twilight a Narcissist?

    MOLESTERBATION

    #98 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    That awkward moment when all those "now neither of us will be virgins!" jokes are suddenly validated.

    Great story, man. can't wait for the next chapter.

    #99 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>249769 the mane six are fanonically fancinated with themselves in male form, it was only a matter of time for someone to ship ponies with themselves... well unless you count that weird trixie fic where she made out with her reflection and her future robot self...

    oh and I wonder about the box too

    ok gentlecolt spill it

    #100 · Chapter 2 · 65w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Let the narcissism begin! :twilightsmile:

    I think I'm going to enjoy this a bit too much. I, uhh, sort of have a thing for clones...:twilightblush:

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