Vinyl Scratch is invincible. But what hurts her the most?
Inspired by What Hurts the Most - Nightcore Remix
Well, I am an intermediate writer, and I am currently drafting a few stories. I like to keep tabs on stories, which just means I like to both read and write.
Vinyl Scratch is invincible. But what hurts her the most?
Inspired by What Hurts the Most - Nightcore Remix
thumbs up on this. i sortta cried i will admit that much but over all it was good becuase i understand that you were rushed for time with this story
loved it....great story....good feels...just one little nitpick i have...
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her eyes are actually magenta......just thought you'd like to know that
Hehehehe theys gonna get it on
2424583
I'm sorry! I completely forgot DX
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all good, i just felt like pointing that out....
and simply pointing something out is too.....normal*shudder*....for me, so i to make a big deal with the quotes and the image
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Ah. To make you feel better, I'll go fix everything
What? That was nice, but it didn't make much sense. It kind of jumped around so I was feeling pretty jolted most of the time. Not bad.
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A lot of my one-shots tend to jump around a bit, considering that this was a competition between myself and some of my friends to see who would write the best story in the shortest amount of time.
But thanks for the feedback
I'm not ~living~ the english language:
How did they can say "Love you" if they just met?
2527080
Basically a run-down "Love at first sight" story. Not a very good one, though
2424583 WHY CAN I NOT STOP LAUGHING AT THE GIF!?!?
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cuz u love it.
.....Jesus Christ, this was a while ago when I read this.
There’s the potential for a good story here.
It’s just buried beneath the layers of atrocious pacing, bizarre dialogue and incomprehensible scene composition.