The Cutie Mark Crusaders meet a mysterious stallion who tells them about his quest. The Cutie Mark Crusaders join him in his hunt for a old forgotten artifact at sea hoping they will get their cutie marks for being pirates. Meanwhile back at home Applejack,Rarity and Rainbow Dash get worried because of Apple Blooms letter and go to find them.
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Pretty good for a first fic. Consider rereading over your work before posting it. Lots of capitalization mistakes and other minor errors that broke my concentration from the story. But overall, you kept my attention, here's a thumbs up.
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Thank you,I've been fixing some errors for about 40 minutes and I'm still not sure if its "Cutie Mark Crusaders" or "Cutie mark crusaders" or even "cutie mark crusaders" this just kills me x3
English Isn't my first language, but i have been speaking it since i was about 4-5 years old,but can you tell me where I've made capitalization errors? That would help me a lot :3
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Thank you :3
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Just remember to only capitalize titles, places, names, etc. For the CMC, you would capitalize all of Cutie Mark Crusaders. If you want a grasp on English grammer, I suggest you read popular stories on here and take note on how they write it. That, or, take a few English classes, that never hurts.
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Oh good,I thought the capitalization thing in English differs from Serbian. Thanks for clearing that out :3
Arrrrr, that's a good story me heartie, keep up the best work and with this music, i'll follow this story along like travelling to the 7 seas (i'm not trying to be funny)
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Will do friend,just as soon as i get some free time from school i'll continue this!
2434639 Arrr, no worries me hearty, a patient pirate like me can wait.
when can the next chapter be expected id like to see what happens, take your time I just am wondering estimate time till next chapter