• Member Since 24th Dec, 2011
  • offline last seen Mar 21st, 2012

Pastel


Hi there ever pony. I am Pastel Lollipop Pie and I am here to write some of the countless stories buzzing around my mind.

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Gilda has kidnapped, beaten up and even tried to murder Pinkie Pie. Yet when Gilda's past comes crashing down on her, will Pinkie forget all that Gilda has done to comfort her in we time of need?

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D'aw. This fanfic made me feel sorry for Gilda.

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This is a really nice story/premise! I wish you had started off with the first non-canon part, where Gilda attacks Pinkie. That part of the story was less-explained. I don't know how you could get pinkie to commit suicide, so that requires a bit more explanation. The longer, the better. :) I can tell that your mind is very creative, so please keep writing! Also, grammar/technical errors did slightly take over the story and make it a bit less readable. Other than that, I really loved it. :pinkiehappy:

Gilda didn't do nothin' for nobody!

D'aaaaawwwww:unsuresweetie:

Thats cute.

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But really, that was amazing:heart:
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Well, imagine if you've been kidnapped, beaten, and've barely had anything to eat at all. I think those circumstances would drive anypony, including Pinkie, to want to end it all...*shrug*

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