A party for Rainbow Dash with plenty of strong cider? Count Gilda in! Except Dash is probably the only pony who wants her there. She shouldn't have come.
Gilda has kidnapped, beaten up and even tried to murder Pinkie Pie. Yet when Gilda's past comes crashing down on her, will Pinkie forget all that Gilda has done to comfort her in we time of need?
This is a really nice story/premise! I wish you had started off with the first non-canon part, where Gilda attacks Pinkie. That part of the story was less-explained. I don't know how you could get pinkie to commit suicide, so that requires a bit more explanation. The longer, the better. :) I can tell that your mind is very creative, so please keep writing! Also, grammar/technical errors did slightly take over the story and make it a bit less readable. Other than that, I really loved it.
But really, that was amazing 190284 Well, imagine if you've been kidnapped, beaten, and've barely had anything to eat at all. I think those circumstances would drive anypony, including Pinkie, to want to end it all...*shrug*
D'aw. This fanfic made me feel sorry for Gilda.
This is a really nice story/premise! I wish you had started off with the first non-canon part, where Gilda attacks Pinkie. That part of the story was less-explained. I don't know how you could get pinkie to commit suicide, so that requires a bit more explanation. The longer, the better. :) I can tell that your mind is very creative, so please keep writing! Also, grammar/technical errors did slightly take over the story and make it a bit less readable. Other than that, I really loved it.
Gilda didn't do nothin' for nobody!
D'aaaaawwwww
Thats cute.
But really, that was amazing
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Well, imagine if you've been kidnapped, beaten, and've barely had anything to eat at all. I think those circumstances would drive anypony, including Pinkie, to want to end it all...*shrug*