Broken Thorn only ever wanted to serve honorably, to work for the betterment of Equestria in the royal guard and serve Princess Celestia.
That didn't work out so well when the Balefire bombs dropped right in the middle of his first mission.
Two hundred years later he finds completing his mission to be the least of his worries. Stranded in the wastes with no friends, a pair of wings he doesn't remember getting and too many questions.
Being an Alicorn is tough.
But being the only Alicorn stallion?
Needless to say hilarity and chaos follow.
This fanfiction is based on Fallout Equestria by Kkat, whose magnificent work of fiction inspired me to seriously write for the first time in my life.
Chapters (6)
Another fucking Fallout Equestria.
another of the rare alicorn FoE stories, looking good
2532998 and you are an idiot for commenting your distaste. if you dont like a certain set of stories then dont click them
Interesting, I'm liking this story ^.^
I found myself laughing at few parts, good story, another chapter please! ^.^
2532998
Think you're looking for this
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It's called having, and then voicing your opinion. Freedom of speech bro.
And to the author: I had an idea like this a while ago, where the protagonist of a FO: E fic would be a male alicorn amongst the rest of unity or whatever it was called.
Needless to say my friend didn't really want to write it so I dropped the idea. But hey, you could pull something interesting from this
Interesting so far. Keep it up!
Hmm... try telling P-21 that you have it bad. Being sex-slave to Stable filled with sadistic, perverse mares is so much worse than everything you, friggin' alicorn, may have.
Shamelessly recommend "P-21, It Has Begun". Not mine, btw)
Now for the story... slow pacing a little bit, it'll be nice.;
2533559 So basically, you're saying that the only comments allowed on a fiction are those that complement the fiction?
2543751 I didn't say that, what you said earlier is disdain for the fic because its an FoE fic
that's neither compliment nor constructive criticism or even dislike for the story itself because of its content
2543751 http://youtu.be/AJOEGjIBniI
It's like what this guy said, you say you don't like this type of story, you saw that this was an FO:E story, and instead of just avoiding it, you actively sought to leave in the comments that you don't like this type of story
2546311 But without hate comments, how will the authors ever learn?
2550111 There are many many people who love these sorts of stories, as long as they like them, they will continue to be written
2550111 True, I want to learn to be a better writer and I don't intend only write FOE stuff always. This is my first time writing so I don't want to miss out on anything good or bad.
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OH god you're right. I love P-21 I would be blessed if I could make a character as great/messed up as him. I honestly think he could deal with Thorn's situation better cause though it doesn't show yet Thorn is a special kind of idiot.
Wait and see.
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Totally. I hate Conversion Bureau fics and bunch of other universes plus some kinds of FoE fics - and if I see them I just NOPE outta that page and never come back. Don't worry about my blood pressure and all that. Gosh, I want option that allows me to hide certain universe fics.
2566099 that would be handy, but there are so many that its not really possible
I can't wait for more ^.^
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Made a few changes to the perks and leveling. Can't believe I was so stupid,it should be more consistent now.
And each of them is larger than the others.
When Chuck Norris found out, he cried in envy.
interesting.