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The Black Crucible

This is a story of four mares and a mysterious colt, that try to go on in life but, something brings them closer together than ever before. Colgate, Ditzy, Lyra, and BonBon must face something that Equestria only once faced before, an evil that has been locked away long before Celestia or her sister Luna was born.
What will happen you ask? Read the story to find out.

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Subatomic Seal

Subatomic Seal #1 · Mar 23rd, 2013 · · · Prologue ·

Hmmmm... *Takes an enormous breath and procedes to talk obscenely fast*

It is pretty hard to tell who is talking, Multiple grammatical errors, (For example, "The Black Crucible's", What belongs to the Black Crucibles? The correct spelling would be "The Black Crucibles".), I would rate.......... 4/10.