A thousand years of ruling has flown by so fast, but the long passing of Twilight's friends awaken a new beginning
Starlight and Twilight: http://matttobar.deviantart.com/art/Your-Faithful-Student-Starlight-Shine-368597025?q=gallery%3Amatttobar&qo=0
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So... many... feels...
Wow I love sad stories but they make me cry a lot
A touching concept, I must admit. However, I beg that you go over and review your work before posting. There were a lot of mechanical issues with the entire thing. Simply remember to capitalize the first letter of a word at the beginning of a sentence, place periods where they belong, always capitalize "I" when referring to oneself, and, over all, just check everything! Even Google something if you're not sure exactly how to do it. Now, to type out everything would simply be me editing it, so I won't do that. Just keep in mind what I said. Please.
However, don't think that I am slamming you. I do enjoy this idea and would like to see it to expand. All I ask is that you take a bit more pride in your work and make it presentable. After all, appearance is the first impression.
Good luck with the rest and I'll check back on this story to see how it progresses once in a while.
This is quaint and yet, amazing.
Also Spike should be still be alive, mainly because He can live thousands of years.
And you earned my favorite today.
2296180 I plan on addressing spike in a later chapter actually
Need work on grammars and wording in this chapter, but otherwise it's good. I think you should get a proofreader or editor.