A short Letter written by pinkie pie to her friends. Telling them about what hid in her deepest parts of her soul.
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2270708
Indeed, the feels are overwhelming.
2270742
please add a chapter revealing what pinkie does next, suicide, running away, whatever you fee like!!!
2270753
woops lol just realized you arent the author
This is very similar to a story I wrote called Broken. This story of yours is very emotional, and just about made me cry. This is going in my faves right this second.
2270753
umm i might. i wrote this last night, it was basically my suicide note changed to be pinkies...
2270770 Hey, no committing suicide. If you need someone to talk to, send me a PM. I am more than willing to listen.
2270840
its ok im too much of a chicken to d it anyway.
2270847 Well, still. I know what it feels like. I am serious about being here to listen to you if you need someone to talk to, okay?
2270856
ill be ok. i think i am gonna write a epilogue. brb.
I can't describe how much this story is so sad and beautiful
Dude, the feels. Seriously, the feels.
I really suggest you read my story, Broken. It might help you. It is really similar to this one.
2271120
i will. i hope the epilogue was good
2271128 I liked it.
2271144
thanks
2271153 You are welcome.
I still can not describe how beautiful this story is
Great job with the epilogue. Kinda depressing, especially Pinkie's last words, even kinda close to the ending of "The Secret Life Of Rarity" (great fic btw), but... I still feel kinda hollow after that one, so it surely wins, but really, great job. I'm even starting to feel sorry for what I am going to do with Pinkie in my upcoming fic...
2271444
thank you
2274263
i cried =(
2275367
sorry
No feels from me. Too many grammatical errors that took away the emotion. I'm sorry this is based on true feelings, but you need to edit it. So I have a few pointers for you.
First of all, "cant" is spelled "can't." You are missing an apostrophe. There are also a few times you have an "I" not capitalized.
Also,
You need an apostrophe in "shes." It should be "she's," because it is a contraction of "she is," just as "can't" is a contraction of "can not."
When something is both capitalized and underlined it seems a little overkill. If you feel like capitalization is not enough emphasis, I recommend italics.
Well, that's all I feel like pointing out for this chapter. I hope you do not take offence for this as I am just trying to help.
Hello again. I will now 'edit' this chapter. By edit I mean point out a few errors.
This does not need to be centered and you do not need a comma after "dear."
Twilight's house. An apostrophe is needed.
The last paragraph needs to be split up. Whenever you have a new speaker, you need a new paragraph.
My last comment on the chapter is that you need to pick a tense and stick with it.
Other than that, this a pretty good. I hope you feel better.
Why is Pinkie always the depressed, sad, misunderstood one?
Oh, the irony.
That's sad...
I hate you for writing such a good sad story about pinkie!
damn, this is just too much for me to take
really well written and emotional