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Earthen Plot harbors a terrible secret despite it's beautiful surroundings. After meeting with a frantic pony claiming to come from the small town Twilight and the gang set out to unravel the mysterious conditions that have befallen the town. They soon discover they are becoming part of a conspiracy that has seeped deep into the minds of all the ponies of Earthen Plot. Inspired by "The Lottery" by Shirley Jackson.

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please put a space between paragraphs.

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Is that a personal preference or is it common for the site here? It seems most people prefer the double space between paragraphs but the style guide says indents and spaces are both correct forms for separating paragraphs, so this doesn't really come across as a critique to me. Is there anything else that struck you in this first part?

2270560 nope its just site preference will make you have a better chance of getting liked.

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