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Twilight Sparkle discovers something in the Everfree Forest. Something that nopony had seen for hundreds of years. A Stargate. A wormhole linking Equus to the rest of the Pegasus Galaxy, not to mention to the home planet of the bipedal race that used to be Equestria's biggest ally before the Equestrian government, headed by Princess Celestia herself, decided that it was time to shut it down for good.

But will that race still be there after all this time? Only one way to find out.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 23 )
Comment posted by Chibalt deleted Aug 15th, 2014
Comment posted by Adamanthys deleted Aug 15th, 2014

Great story so far. For my prediction I am giving 10 to 1 odds she just recharged all the ZPMs bringing all systems on line at full power, That would be a great help to the SGA team.

Eh, it's okay but could use a good, thorough, run through by an editor. There are several noticable spelling and grammar errors.

4859595 or she could have overloaded them... causing a massive EMP blast through the city disabling the defences for a coincidental wraith attack :twilightsmile:

>>Danbrixton passably however it has been stated that the Elements only put things back in balance not destroy so charging them is more likely.

"Not this again..."
:rainbowlaugh:

4865764 Yeah, I know. Sorry about that. :twilightsheepish:

uh oh, Twilight, plus Magic, plus the mane 6 bad luck and Atlantis bad luck equals big Trouble, anyways good Story so far, a bit fast in tract, but not bad, Keep going

Comment posted by Homunclus deleted Nov 20th, 2014
Comment posted by CarmenColor deleted Nov 20th, 2014
Comment posted by Kusac deleted Nov 24th, 2015

*Poke*
*Poke*
*Pokepokepoke*
:rainbowderp:

Well, it certainly want Zecora's house waiting around the corner.

wasn't

This was starting to seem worse and worse all the time.

far more worse

glancing over at the smaller metal thing the twilight had turned on earlier.

that Twilight

They will be on great help to us now that the galaxy can once again use this ancestral ring."

a

It took much longer for them to get there than when Celestia and Twilight and gone.

had

"I know, but they need to know what were up against here..."

we're

"Girls, we have something that ? to talk to you about, and it's not going to be pleasant..."

? = we need

Her friends were staring attach other in horror.

at each
Funny if she transported Atlantis city ship to Equus.

6722401 poke
poke
poke
:twilightangry2:STOP POKING ME!

7501702 :facehoof: That's... terrible. You've got poking on the brain. :trixieshiftright:

7502370 Couldn't find anything else close to relevant?

No the Stargate doesn't do transformative of People or things if it did then the living Ocean from Stargate SG-1 would be a human instead of water or whatever it is. :facehoof:

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