Twilight always felt something special for her little dragon assistance but after a night of alcohol and sin, her life would change for the worse and for the better.
Did I review this? I think I did...huh. I would suggest an editor, this was a bit hard to understand but very well though of, loved it. Shit Manicores are beast I had thought Death would have came but a demon form of Spike is even better, I loved it, shit you are doing so well on this, can't wait for more
um please someone edit this... my brain read this in a dutch accent for fucksake. I aint even dutch. this was awful and made my brain hurt. it's called grammar... learn to it
2305604 Believe me man that's the best I got English isn't our local language if yo must now.... My proof reader says his computer kinda bit out of wack for now..... unfortunately
finally got round to reading this! and i'm glad as fuck that i did dragons can eat through diamonds metal cuffs should be easy, also why not flame message Celestia?
Did I review this? I think I did...huh. I would suggest an editor, this was a bit hard to understand but very well though of, loved it. Shit Manicores are beast I had thought Death would have came but a demon form of Spike is even better, I loved it, shit you are doing so well on this, can't wait for more
um please someone edit this... my brain read this in a dutch accent for fucksake. I aint even dutch.
this was awful and made my brain hurt. it's called grammar... learn to it
2305604 Believe me man that's the best I got English isn't our local language if yo must now....
My proof reader says his computer kinda bit out of wack for now..... unfortunately
2303317 Thanks for the reviews again pal your the best!
2303317 And another thing DEATH is your thing mine's the sin side of a person........
2306401 My pleasure And sin could work for anyone Very nice choice
bacon. that is all
How about no.
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finally got round to reading this! and i'm glad as fuck that i did
dragons can eat through diamonds metal cuffs should be easy, also why not flame message Celestia?
2694888 Now that you said it..........................................
2710867 Me and my buddy ShadowofAdemon88 will deal with that chapter soon, sorry for the inconvenience and grammar......
2250083 think you could forward that list to me, too? It's kinda my favourite ship, and I'm having a real hard time finding many of them.
I love this.
Twilight's nightmare = how it would have really gone after that night, except the killing part.
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I would also love to get a copy of that list too. I love reading Twilight and Spike stories.
Great story by the way.