Twilight always felt something special for her little dragon assistance but after a night of alcohol and sin, her life would change for the worse and for the better.
Damn, besides the errors and verbal confusion, this was just bucked up, so Twi palns to kill herself? How dark, very well thought of though, shit.....shall read on
Romance tag--Spilight, OK Dark tag--sold into slavery, possible rape (instead turned into passionate love-making), vengence by Trixie, OK Tragedy tag-- I guess that's for the attempted suicide (the cut wrists, right?)
All the tags here are used correctly, from what I'm seeing. glad to see that Twilight's gonna be able to recover, please make it so that she can tell AJ and Rainbow that she and Spike are a couple. I also hope that somehow, Spike gets to escape from Trixie and is able to get back to Twilight to truly see how he feels about her.
2248606 Do you think you could point me out to some good spilights?
2249697 Guess I really am the one to go to for Spilight stories huh? Yeah, I got your back, give me a second and I'll send you a list
2248661 I can agree with that, but just keep asking, I'm sure one will aid you soon
Damn, besides the errors and verbal confusion, this was just bucked up, so Twi palns to kill herself? How dark, very well thought of though, shit.....shall read on
This is so full of errors that I might as well be reading it to see how not to write. But the story is fun. Is Trixie going to have her way Spike?
Romance tag--Spilight, OK
Dark tag--sold into slavery, possible rape (instead turned into passionate love-making), vengence by Trixie, OK
Tragedy tag-- I guess that's for the attempted suicide (the cut wrists, right?)
All the tags here are used correctly, from what I'm seeing. glad to see that Twilight's gonna be able to recover, please make it so that she can tell AJ and Rainbow that she and Spike are a couple. I also hope that somehow, Spike gets to escape from Trixie and is able to get back to Twilight to truly see how he feels about her.
Good lord, you have to let me edit this for you. I will not allow my favored ship to go down like this.
It has the potential, but lacks the deliverance!
2252050 Sorry but that's the best I can do......
2250130 the next on will be a bit comedic I shall put in....
2254953 You seems so................
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2250130 For a second I thought I was reading one of your stories