I'm relatively new to the world of fanfiction, but I do have a real deep passion for both MLP:FIM and writing.
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Quill Scratch arrived in Ponyville in a matter befitting the very stories he wrote; dragged to town bloody and broken by Twilight Sparkle. Three years later and with writer's block, he has been making do by getting whatever work he could. But when Twilight needs his help on an assignment, he finds the need to not only write, but to tell his own story.
A story of rage, pain and utter loneliness.
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I'll just point this out before I toss this into my favorites... (it's how I track things) Give it a look see later
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Thank you. I don't know how I keep missing these little mistakes.
I like this, it has potential. It is gramattically sound, even though it has a little trouble with pacing. Things happen kind of quickly, and I missed the 'ink blot being Quill's boss' the firrst time you wrote it.
Also, backstory and 'show, don't tell' , but you aren't messing up, so have a
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Thank you very much.
Quick little typo here ^_^
Haha, nevermind lol... Just read entry 20 of the Luna Diaries
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Thanks for catching that.
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Thank you, and I'm pretty sure you can find it. I wrote almost a paragraph as a clue.
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That isn't the reference, but you are close.
Awww YEAH!!
I enjoy human stories, and having Lyra in a humanized fanfic is always fun. She does seem to know an awful lot about humans. I almost wonder if she'd sit like a pony if she were a human? hmm...
Besides, it's got Luna! Can't go wrong there.
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Thank you. I'm ecstatic that you're enjoying it. And if you like Luna, have a look at my other story; The Luna Diaries.
2251665 I already have it saved under "read later" so that I can get around to it once I've caught up on all the stories I've marked. I love this site, even once the show draws to an end, I will still be reading fanfics for years to come.
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Exact same reason I love it.
2251715 I'm glad that I won't be the only brony around in five years. Some of us are just kinda...well...bronies. Ya know? Why stories like My Little Dashie hurt so much is because we know that one day it's going to end, just like his relationship with Dash, and that we will never see this again. I would rather postpone that day as long as possible.
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I think that in a few years we will be self sustaining enough that we won't need the show. We have already started the process by having full fan-made episodes.
2251769 So the Double Rainboom is out? Yes, Hasbro is starting to chew on their nails at this phenomenon that is conquering the marketing world. I hope they drop all those stupid cease and desist orders. Both fighting is magic and friendship is witchcraft have felt the brunt of it.
Oh, well, we are unstoppable!!
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No, double rainboom's not OUT yet, but the trailer just came out. But did you hear that Lauren Faust has joined the FIM team?
2251824 Yes, I did, actually. Their called the mane6 and Lauren has been a brony since before bronies, so of course she joined in!
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I'm so excited. I love fighting games.
2253582 I still remember Mortal Kombat, and after that they started to really appeal!
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I managed to pick up Mortal Kombat 4 for my N64 about a year ago, and it's a lot more fun then you would imagine.
2253662 I'll have to give it a look. I've played Mortal Kombat vs. DC, and that one was pretty fun. I enjoyed whuppin' superman's flank with a good solid can of Baraka. (sorry, but he's my fav.)
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I usually went with Flash or Green lantern in that game.
2253763 LOL! I would regret fighting flash, too many fast moves.
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I troll my friends by using a teleport move just as they are about to hit me. They get so frustrated.
2253905 Probably. I would too, if I was them.
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Did you ever learn how to do any of the heroic brutalities?
2254165 Of course. If your into Flash, his is like this whirlwind thing where he levitates his enemy and uses him as a punching bag at hyper speeds.
Everyone has one, and they aren't that hard to come by. To actually perform it, right, right, left , circle is pretty standard, but not for everyone. Wait until they're almost dead. Wait, yur talking n64, right? I don't remember those too well...I basically only mario karted with that system. That and starfox. 
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No I mean in MK vs DC and the one that I learnt for flash is where he superfast puches from a few different angles and then when they fall over, he super fast gutterstomps them.
2254203 Okay, yeah. I know Baraka's by heart! I especially like the one where he slashes their face twice, then impales them, and finally throws them over his shoulder like a used rag!
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Wow, that's great.
2251088 Hmm.... The part where it talks about Quill haveing the interview with Luna?
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Nope. To be honest, you are thinking too far into the story, its more at the beginning.
Sorry it took me so long to do a review on this.
I guess first thing I'd say to do is to try and find a cover art--that'd help immensely on drawing in viewers. The punctuation could use some sprucing up too--there was at least one or two times you had dialogue for two different characters in the paragraph.
Other than that, seems alright so far--characterization looks pretty kosher, anyway.
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you looking at it.
As for cover art, I've commissioned someone, but they haven't been responding to me.
And thanks again. I'll have another look through and fix those punctuation mistakes.
Alright, added to Twilight's Library.
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Thank you very much, appreciate it.
Hmmm humanized. This will be new for me lol.
Dude that was crazy!