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Crystalline HP


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When the recently emancipated Discord reanimates his old tricks, Princess Celestia calls upon her former student and devises a plan to test the true extent of his reformation.

But, in the shadow of an unexpected arrival, Discord's knowledge of her past could spell more, unforeseeable chaos.

Faithfully assisting Celestia are Twilight and her friends, who have their own problems: namely the intertwining circumstances that are pushing them to discover repressed feelings, pounding hearts...and each other.

My deepest and utmost thanks to Kolth for his tireless efforts in co-authoring this story. Many thanks are also showered upon pre-reader SCS and cover artist Tylerdavasal.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 8 )

Now mere inches away, he produced a vial of a fine, white solid and reached over, slowly pouring the reagent into the liquid. The entire sample dissolved almost instantly.

Iocane powder, anyone? :derpytongue2: (princess bride reference)

This is nicely done and your writing is excellent. Quality stuff. I look forward to more.

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Thanks! The plot will start to truly kick in from chapter 3 onwards, where things should get pretty interesting...

Let me guess: Celestia has been manipulating both sides of the hero-villain equation, and the mere possibility Luna, Twilight and the Elements discover her little dirty bussines by pulling an Inception on Discord may be enough to make her panic.

Who is the boss? Lord Discord is Boss!

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You're off the mark, I'm afraid. Much will be revealed during the next few chapters, but not nearly enough to sate an appetite wanting to discover the thoughts and motives swimming inside every character.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy what I release in future! :twilightblush:

Ooh! Ooh ooh ooh! I think I know what the disharmonic elements are!

I know I can tell everyone this: the new elements are C'mon, you think I'd actually spoil it? How ridiculous.

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