September 26, 2016 - New York City
Six squads of the American Delta Force have been dispatched on a mission that could decide on the victor of the war against the Russians. Overlord, code-named Princess Celestia, leads the teams through the operation as they learn about their "friendship".
Characters:
Overlord (Codename "Celestia")
Breach Team (Codenamed "Pinkie Pie")
Bomb Squad (Codenamed "Twilight Sparkle")
Extraction Team (Codenamed Applejack")
Sniper Support (Codenamed "Rarity")
Air Recon (Codenamed "Fluttershy")
Air Support (Codenamed "Rainbow Dash")
Chapters (4)
Dat picture!
i believe the time you were looking for is actually 16:20
What the h**l?!
This is funny. Looks good so far!
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Lol I wish Rarity would be like this
And Twilight "Bomb Squad"
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This is pretty good, tracked.
Thanks everypony! I'll be posting a new chapter every day, and I'm planning on a sequel.
this is really good hahahahahaha
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I'm liking it, but are they just using the nicknames or are they actual ponies?
184726 nicknames
What's with the terseness of the story? All four chapters average out at 300 words! Don't write chapters by minute. This chapter alone would've taken at least five or six minutes to occur. Be realistic. Just write chapters. Not what occurs in "one minute."
cool story bro
operation MOTHER BUCKING FRIENDSHIP!
Do you think you'll ever get back to this?