Life in Equestria: Holidays with Toby Is Up!
The first of my short story collection titled "Life in Equestria: Holidays with Toby" is up. I hope you all enjoy it as much as "A New Home", and thank you all so much always for your wonderful support.
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2705396 Well, yes I didn't want him to be a complete a-hole toward Toby, but still a spoiled bunny.
2705495 Let me just promise you when you get to that chapter, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash gets them some.
2706232 Thank you for the advice very much, and yes I believe I do need a proofreader. If I may ask, was you maybe referring to yourself or do you have someone else in mind that wouldn't mind proofreading my story?
2706193 oh, hehe. I know, I wanted that to be like a real emotional and touching moment for Toby to say to Fluttershy. Thank you.
2705984 Well, I am glad that It wasn't too dark. I thought about making it Pinkamena Diane Pie dark, but Mr101 along with my other readers gave me ideas of how I could make it still dark, but not extremely dark.
2707633 I totally agree with you. At some points in our lives, we are all likely to get bullied, harassed, or at least get annoyingly teased by someone or a group of people. I myself have had my share, mainly during middle school (which is probably where it happens the most). But to be honest, I feel more disturbed and angry about watching somebody else being attacked more than myself. I don't know why I feel more that way, but I think it has to do with restraining myself, knowing that I CAN defend myself alot when being harassed. Or maybe it's just a "hero complexity."
2709306 Still human.
I'm trying my best not to read this story before summer vacation. I didn't even start reading and the feels are piercing through my heart like nails!
This shall always be one of my top favorite fics with intense feels. I enjoyed it, and...as a personal note, broke my record of 24 medium-length chapters in a day, by reading this fic. I'm gonna read the Holidays one now...bai nao!
2710995 I thank you very much for all your wonderful comments, and indeed the father is indeed a well, what you said.
I am truly touched that you feel that this is one of your top fav. fanfics, thank you very much. 
2710334 I hoped to get peoples' feels to be real strong when I first started this story, and it excelled my expectations with all of my readers' wonderful comments and support. Thank you
2711256 I know it was a very slow start in getting interesting, but thank you for your kind words always.
2718116 Thank you very much, and Hans Zimmer is always beautiful with his music.
2719161 Well, I appreciate that very much, thank you.
2724649 To be honest, I never heard that song, but that is beautiful, I could just see that being sung while Rarity was working on his outfit.
Thank you for sharing that.
2732143 Oh, that is true. Thank you for that idea, that is a very good time to celebrate his birthday.
Link is broke.
2744822 Thank you very kindly, I truly appreciate it.
2750340 Thank you for your kind words, support, and also great advice. I am going to go over each chapter and see what I can do to tweak it or make each sound better.
2750340
Challenga acceptedo, imma tank it!
Quick question, we all know the names of the ponies rule 63 counterparts
Twilight Sparkle-Dusk Shine
Rainbow Dash-Rainbow Blitz
Fluttreshy-Butterscotch
Rarity-Elusive
Pinkie Pie-Bubble Berry
Both Applejack's have the same name
Princess Celestia-Lord Solaris
Princess Luna-Prince Artemis
My question is if there was a rule 63 version of this story, what would Toby's name be if he was a girl?
2786210 Oh, wow.. hmm.. alright let's see, Toby's rule 63 name would be I think Hope or Faith, because his heart is pure and filled with great love and care.
2786227 Works for me
2797987 Oh, I love that song by Ozzy. That would have been def. one of my choices. Thank you though for that, and also for your support.
2856647 Thank your for your kind words, and don't worry, I figured out his height is 2.3 inches just right at the nose of the fillies. I didn't want him to be a regular sized human too much, because I didn't want him to have a threatening appearance.
2875915 A very beautiful song it is too. Thank you again for sharing my friend.
2883191 I have been thinking about that, and I have something special maybe planned in my head about that.
2887415 Hehe.
2923449 Thank you for all the love as always.
2924710 Thank you again for all the love.
2786227 rule 63 Toby
2935201 Thank you very much my friend always. I am honored and touched that you did enjoy this story. I hope you enjoy the Holiday series one, and the sequel when you get to it. Working on Chapter Four of it now.
2927851 I understand, and thank you for the good luck wishes.
2935281
Especially the ending when you had Fluttershy sing, "You'll Be In My Heart," I'll admit that I almost cried right there. It was such a perfect song to end the story. After I finished reading the last chapter I was like, "Oh, that's it, huh? Well, now I'm depressed." But then... You have more!
P.S. I already read the Nightmare Night chapter, I thought it was very cute.
2937232 Thank you very much always for your kind words and support. I hoped that "You'll Be In My Heart" would be perfect ending this story.
is this appropriate for this story?
ah well... I think so, kinda
2939083 WoW! that left me speechless. I love Linkin Park, and I think that song relates to Toby perfectly for what he has went through to end up in such a loving and caring place with an amazing family and friends who love him and promise to take care of him.
Thank you for that, I loved it.
2939270 it is my absolute favorite song from them, Skin to Bone, I'll be Gone, and Roads Untravelled, are close faves though
2940625 Mine are Numb, Breaking the Habit, and In the End.
2940917 good songs, they are
2945720 What can I say, I wanted to aim for the feels with this story.
2968620 Aww..hehe.. thank you.
2977517 Oh, lol.. you never know he might. But he is the type of young boy, or young man when he grows up to be that age who will have his heart for one mare.
2982228 Exactly how I believe each of my readers and friends felt toward that sick bastard.
Help me.....I'm dieing of feels......When I got to the last song I just............*grunt*........*dies*
2982780 The last song, some of my readers thought would go perfect with the ending, and every time I hear it, it fills me up. It fits perfectly with Fluttershy and her love as a mother for Toby, even though he is not a pony.
2984660 Its because of how perfectly it if in to that part of the story that I'm a ghost today. The reason I'm still on earth is because I need to read A New Home II.
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2997835 I understand exactly where you are coming from. I regret though not reading My Little Dashie when I first joined Fimfiction.net. However, I am just glad I did, because that story caused me from reading it aloud, so I had to read it silently. A beautiful touching fan fic and my all time favorite. Thank you very much also for your kind words. I am glad you are liking it so far.
3001347 Hehe.. I knew I would get some reaction when I wrote that part.
3004020 Indeed. I hope you enjoy the rest of your ride through it.
Thank you very much for your kind words. 