Companionship isn't always rainbow sunshine sparkle.
idea from church and also his prize
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somehow I see the picture inappropriate lol
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they be humpin
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Ha! Knew it!
It's always sad when you lose a beloved pet :(
You captured the essence of such a thing quite well, and while I think the story could have been longer, you did a great job anyway. :)
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i can't really relate to that as i've never had a pet
also i can't really say that i would've made this longer because some of it is actually just complete garbage
storywise that is
2200792 Meh, I've read much worse. No need to beat yourself up about it
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it's actually legitimately bad because when you punch writer's block in the face, it leaves you with all sorts of garbage and maybe a diamond or two
That was quite a good read.
Glad I took the time to do so.
Hmmm...this brought a tear in my eye. i1153.photobucket.com/albums/p520/sexdrugs39/cute_meme.png
Nothing lasts forever indeed. But the lessons learned from loss are some of the most valuable.
Pretty different story. Enjoyable still.
For a hot second, I assumed this fic was about dog sex.
You accomplished quite a bit in under one-thousand words. You had me hooked with the first few lines, and I felt really grounded and inside the scene and setting as I read through the piece. The most effective thing about this piece is the emotional pay off we, the reader, gets after only having read a few thousand words. All that said, there were times when I didn't feel very grounded in the perspective of the piece (I wasn't entirely sure who's eyes I was viewing the world from). So there are still a few things that could use a little work.
Anyway, all that said, this was definitely 1,000 words well spent. Here, have a favorite and an upvote for your excellent work!
Hoppity HOPPITY Hoppity I'm the Easter Bunny
Nice.