This is the best thing. AJ/Braeburn has proved nigh on impossible to find except for this story and what a story it is.
Brb while I read it over and over again.
Man, I know it's probably rude to ask and impractical to do but I would really like to see the fallout and/or continuation in a sequel.
Can't get over this, dang. <3

^ I agree; a sequel would be appreciated, but certainly not necessary. You've already given closure ("We've got to keep this to ourselves"). Given that and the fact that the two of them remain as close as family can be, notwithstanding the geographic distance (reference the mutual ease of address in the Appleoosa episode), I can't think of any reason for a sequel. Unless, of course, you have an idea for drama - then by all means go ahead.

I loved how acted (sorry for the meme, but it fits!) like a boss at the end.

Okay, so I'm a pretty big clop critic so here I go. The opening was a bit long, for I didn't sense any sort of romance/connection until about 3/5 of the way through. Detail is good, but some was unnecessary. There weren't too many errors which was good. The whole running thing seemed unmotivated and on the fly. There was no build up to the sex. I would ahve liked to see some in the first seen between AJ and Brae. Liked the ending. Now for the clop. I liked the scene. It was set perfectly in the rain and mud and it really got steamy; however, it was fairly short scene for a clop fic and the two only doing it one way made it seem rushed. I liked the story overall, and thumbs up, but I would like to see some improvement.

aww yea! nice story. do i sound like a perv. only commenting on sexy stories? i just dont comment on anything else, thats why

lel that iamge....

noooo , i keep getting 404 error , can't save it :c ....

more!!!