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The Longest Hour

On the Day of Remembrance, Twilight observes the sombre memorial to the fallen Royal Guard ponies.

Author's note:

I borrowed and then adapted (Ponified) "Over the hills and Far Away" from Sharpe's Rifles. The original is readily available on Youtube.

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BlueEricsson

BlueEricsson #1 · Nov 8th, 2011 · · ·

this was very good. I sugguest putting a description, however. You'll get more readers that way.

Sturm Panzer

Sturm Panzer #2 · Nov 8th, 2011 · · ·

27754

I thought I did have that in there. Apperently not. Fixed.

#3 · Nov 9th, 2011 · · ·

Where was Luna?

I liked this piece a lot - and I'm not the sort that demands Luna be in every story, but it'd be appropriate for her to be present here.

All the same, bravo.

Sturm Panzer

Sturm Panzer #4 · Nov 9th, 2011 · · ·

I had planned to include Luna, but I just wasn't satisfied with how it was working out, so I simply removed her, instead of letting her flounder as little more than an over-glorified background-pony.

sleezywheezy

sleezywheezy #5 · Jan 2nd, 2012 · · ·

I thought it would be kind of strange to have Luna in there, myself. As Nightmare Moon, and corrupted by greed and other evil little things, she and her own forces probably warred with the Royal Guard before Celestia banished her to the moon. Maybe she stayed behind out of guilt?