Centuries after Princess Twilight's coronation, she's met with her fate to be passed on to the greater beyond. As she is a princess born an average pony, Twilight understands and accepts that she will live a much shorter lifespan. Transferred to a realm of enigmatic properties, she meets a divine spirit passing judgement.
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A little odd. I can't place what it is, but the story feels off to me. But still a good story. Maybe a little bit more lead up, or a longer opening, or more description of what is the world. I don't know. But I think a good start.
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Thanks for the feedback! Are you saying that I'm giving more description and a longer opening than what will suffice? I might agree with you there, I went a little crazy on that department.
This bit is annoying me:
That's in present tense, while the rest of the fic is in past..
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Whoops! Thanks for pointing it out, fixed now.
jremy pls
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2371675 MALCOLM PLS
A rather deep story you have here. Nicely done.