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varilla111


am writing some fics for fun, thats all you need to know

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Do you believe in ghosts? Of course you don't, no rational pony believes in them, but when some pony becomes a ghost it also gets very hard to refuse their existence. Also, aren't we all suppose to die eventually?
"Okay let’s get on topic over here. My name is Stella, I am a Pegasi and I am looking for my killer, if I have one of course. I need to know what happened to me, like seriously how and why the heck I died?!"

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Please don't hate me, this is actual constructive criticism. You would get a lot more people reading if the title was grammatically correct. An story in the afterlife should be changed to A Story in the Afterlife. You see, "An" should only be used if the word following it starts with a vowel, (A, E, I, O, U, and if the situation warrants, Y).

2198602 Don't forget the vowel sounds, as in "An MLP fanfic" where it is pronounced emm-ell-pee

2198737
Yes, I purposefully excluded that. I couldn't think of a good way to put it, (some writer I am, eh?), so I just left it out.

Don't be an hero, Billy!

2198602 doesn't matter, I posted this because I didn't want it to stay isolated on my computer forever

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