A dungeon deep and dungeon old, a tale of prophecy fortold.
A sword that will come forth one day, to keep the darkness at bay.
To protect the ones who wield, the sword first must have to yield.
First must come the sworn allegiance.
A pact of blood called to honor.
Powers of harmony collide.
and a time of war fulfilled.
Written by-Venful
Tell me truthfully what you think of the story and where I messed up. I Accept all comments weither it be good or bad. so just tell me truthfully what you think...
P.S- Tell me whatever tags I might be missing, I would like my story to be accurate at least in description. And the story is set somewhere along the lines of the end of season 2 and the begining of season three. I won't do all the episodes for season 3 but I WILL use some along the story.
i like it please continue
2151294 No problem. chapters might be up every thursday or friday. or on the weekends! whenever I got the time I'll write a new chapter! and thanks for reading it!
P.S. I am buzy also with another story of mine and Assesments for school. It also doesn't help that im addicted to writing.
might be good to make a time schedual.......
Repetition can get really annoying, and there were a few other instances where this sort of thing happened.
Aside from that though, good start.
2161608 hmmm thank you for noticing that, this is one of my first story ideas. I'll look into it in future chapters, and maybe when I have time I'll go over the previous ones and make some minor changes, Like getting rid of repitition!
Thank you still though for noticing these things, I would not have because of my assesments being due in a couple of days so yea.... thanks
Edit: And bam fixed that chapter up!
Hope you all enjoy the extra long chapter, spent a while planning that one.
And I'm going to be buzy next week so expect a late chapter or an early chapter
good chapter
2179025 Awesome I'm working on making chapters longer my friend so look forward to it. EARLY WEDNESDAY OFF FOR ME: CHAPTER PLANNING. Thursday: Writing said chapter Friday: BUZY Saturday: Whole day writing and editing Sunday: Hopefully new chapter release? Today?: NOTHING HAHA I got the afternoon to do shiz my way for once..
oh thats right I got work to do...... damn
Anyway thats the schedual for this week. new ones will be updated every week seeing as I'm a VERY buzy person.
-Venful
P.S- Is it just me or is Lady Luck just on Vacation this year? cause shiz don seem to be goin' mah way.
2180682 much apreciated
and dont worry about lady luck, she'll come around
Quick post!
I will update the tags and characters as I go along with the story, just let me know if I missed a tag or something mkay?
Might be happy by the new chapter coming out but..... No Spoilers
you have to wait.......
Anywho just wanted ya'll to know I'm in the middle of writing chapter 4 now, so a new chapter might actually be out by tomorrow or saturday instead of sunday
I am still going on about making the chapters longer! anywho. I'm off for a couple of days due to a doctor saying something about somewhatever it was that doctors say.... so wish me good health or whatever....
Yay.... NEW CHAPTER!! Took me a while and I MIGHT have missed my set deadline...
but its there. 
Anyway.... TIME TO PLAN FOR NEXT CHAPTER!
dralicorn. huh, ok. i'd love to see a picture of what he looks like now.
2207573 I know that feel man....
I know that feel. Sadly I am ABSOULTLY CRAP at drawing. hmmm. It would be fun if someone helped here since I have no clue how to draw...... At all. I can give a description of the Dralicorn as seen in the chapter, but thats mostly it.
hey askin a question here... How good are ya at drawing???
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i'm crap at drawing or else i'd gladly do it myself. hopefully someone else can do a decent job at it.
2207801 Well if you know or find anyone point them my way or send me a link to them please.
I would be GRATEFUL O.O
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of course! it'd be my pleasure.
2208159 Nice Bass Cannon btw
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why thank you! i like your picture too, even if i'm not sure what it is. it's still cool!
2208251 Eh
I was looking for a good pic of a Dragon, but I didn't want to get it due to the Dralicorn thing. I found this on google. Wolf with Wings, kinda awesome. Still Bass Cannon beats wolf with wings any day. 
beats it anyday.
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https://encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQUvz4GPVMyQNSvwMhYIwKXc7ltCiazrLPNoCBpGp0aCaJNtTKNgw
https://encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRXquYAiH6E8fftBlUTDpk_O32ZaR5fBJIwBveSmf31zsxQ9yyWDQ
maybe these would better fit?
2208621 You sir! have saved my hide. And for that I am Grateful i would say the red one but the black one has a more dragon feel to it, The red one just looks like it has changeling fangs. Thank you for your help btw
I appreciate it
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no prob. just doin what i thought would help.
Quick Post:
I messed up the name in the chapter as Draco Lamina,
Dragon Blade Previously it was Draco Colerem, Dragon Kin I rectified that mistake. And so I Went over the previous chapter 4 and well got rid of my mistake. Just think it was never there to begin with...... please? 
HAAZA! Early Update! and would you look at that! It's only thurday here! GLORIUS!
Anywho Enjoy da new chapter mates!
I'm thinking of doing bonus chapters... Like you know... Stuff, and Stuff.
Up to you guys really.
-Venful
Good job for this chapter
2226854 Thank you!
It took me a while to get it done... Totaly worth it in the end. No? 
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cliffhanger
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(I think my picture does not work
2228621 Ahhhhh. I love when that happens...
Don't you? Funny thing though. I DIDN'T WANT to leave it there, so I'm on the next chapter immediatly! 
And the picture does work. just need to open link in new tab.
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it sounds better now, except where you replaced the repetitive area with a repetitive magic. it's no where near the amount it was before, but it's still a little repetitive. I feel like I'm saying repetitive too much now
this chapter has a couple run on sentences, or just places that need a comma to slow down the words. You dont think like pinkie pie talks, after all.