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She lacks the mental fortitude of the part 1 characters, particularly Lance. This is a trauma that will haunt her for a long time.
Me adding in the broken face plate has added a great opportunity for a mysterious past. All that's left to do is wait for the reveal, cause she has issues.
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With this act he has killed any semblance of goodness within him. He can never go back.
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This was really depressing. Luna's been with the story since the single digit chapters, to see her go like this is... It would have been easier to digest if it was a fight scene.
Celestia is doing her part as a background character. Mainly by becoming part of the background.
The most conveniently timed vacation ever. She'll be in for a surprise when she gets back.
This does provide an opportunity for a revolution style arc later, with Nova as the face of the rebellion. Or possibly Starch. There are very few of Luna's bloodline left. Cadence isn't prominent enough to take over (If Champion doesn't kill her). Mr. Bleak would put everyone in detention. Spark might be a good back-up if his archangel status gives him immortality.
There is a chance that either someone else becomes an alicorn/immortal or the government system has a complete overhaul. But it's a bit early to be thinking about these details.
The Don himself arrives. This fight is going to be fun to read. He has this delightful evilness to him, something like Richard Hawk.
He's like Lance. but evil. Still as much as a dumbass as the original though.
Mr. Bleak once again proving himself as the most reliable person around. He actually bothered to level grind.
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Yeah, she’s got a long road ahead of her. The part 1 characters came from earth and were idiots.
That was a great choice on your part xD her whole story came together once I saw her picture.
He’s gone now.
Yeah this was a planned moment I was hoping I wouldn’t screw up. Luna at this point wasn’t her hotheaded self. So she wanted the best for her kids, even if one was Champion.
Jesus
the others are going to return and be very surprised, I’ll say that much. XD
The Don sends his regards. *bang bang* I just hope to do him justice.
Oh he’s 100% just evil Lance, so he’s a edgy dumbass.
Mr. Bleak has always been the goat of LTD xD