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The story of how an overqualified dying princess became a drug lord.

Proofread by Benny Brohoof.

First Published
8th Jul 2013
Last Modified
8th Jul 2013

This story's pretty good so far, keep at it :twilightsmile:

I like it!

But can I be *that guy* and point out some grammatical errors?


I copied it over to a google document here, so that I could use the comment system there.


Thanks. I'll give ya a credit for it.


Thanks! I'd be glad to do it for any other chapters, if you'd like.

This is going to be great, I can feel it

I like where this is going. Only problem I had were the occasional misspellings and grammatical issues. You might need a better proof reader than the one you already have. Besides that though this is really good! I'll keep an eye on this fic! :pinkiehappy:

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