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"witch she would glady tare appart"
which she would gladly tear apart
and some other mistakes like Hallway having one L instead of two and something else I've completely lost. I kinda like this idea you could totally make it longer if you felt like it. Try and expand it cause rainbow having a foal does seem like an interesting idea (one I've yet to come across besides her 'adopting scootaloo' I've never seen her have her own)
so decent job
Other then a few errors, it looks great. I would love to see more of this.
That's pretty good! I'mma track it just in case, okay?
i say you could of made it longer. but all in all good job.
Soarin?
A fine fic for a first fic. You may be in need of a proofreader or and editor though. I wish you the best of luck in your future stories.