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Can I ask what you disliked? It will help my editing, and the author, develop.
2285841
What is so strange, the shipping or the fact that it isn't a straight clopfic?
ok i see what i did
2285841 ok one its the of you are and the other of is john that's it it is going back in forth in the story
2285841ok I fucked up one it is one oc is the one you are following and the other is john so there you go it is going back and fourth
I bet you can see what you did wrong...good story by the way
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The edit you made put the rest of the story in italics. Also the partial italics on the Wh and the normal, "at" was to show what he thought internally before saying it aloud.
Kinda like; if you go over a problem in your head and then say, "that wouldn't work," aloud.