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Ok now let's fix it.
Just tell me were i mest up and i will fix it
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For one thing, you're not using "redundant" correctly. "Redundant" means "superfluous", not "repetitive".
Ok so that's sucks I will fix that
2155469 Seriously? Four in a row?
If you want to know what I meant, I mean that since four stories I looked at, you typed a comment to each one. You are like... everywhere
2157306 yes I am I'm like pinki with story's
Ok so now I have two editors one for the chapters and the other with spelling and gramer
good story i really liked it a lot.
Thank you friends are helping with
Wow dictionary
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Hm. It appears that you are correct.
I understood "redundant" to be differentiated from "repetitive" by the property of excessiveness. It seems, however, that "redundant" has an additional meaning that simply refers to similarity and/or extravagance. Thank you for bringing that to my attention.
For the second time DICTIONARYS
Every pony Sry about the late chapter I messed up in many ways now it is going to be done soon
Most credit goes to Hydra for the editing ect thank you for the likes and comment the story (i am not saying fanfic because i forget sometimes)
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Can I ask what you disliked? It will help my editing, and the author, develop.
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What is so strange, the shipping or the fact that it isn't a straight clopfic?
ok i see what i did
2285841 ok one its the of you are and the other of is john that's it it is going back in forth in the story
2285841ok I fucked up one it is one oc is the one you are following and the other is john so there you go it is going back and fourth
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If you don't like it don't read it just forget what you just read and read another one by some one else and I don't care about the critisisem
Good Story keep it up^^
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Thanks
I bet you can see what you did wrong...good story by the way
WRONG GRAMMER
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It wasn't edited and checking framers soon
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Ifd up I'm in rushe
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The edit you made put the rest of the story in italics. Also the partial italics on the Wh and the normal, "at" was to show what he thought internally before saying it aloud.
Kinda like; if you go over a problem in your head and then say, "that wouldn't work," aloud.
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Hydra your back thank god I need help please
2407970i want...to say taco...is that agenst the law...I THOUGHT NOT
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What
what did he say
I dont know blitz
2411314 you are more confusing than I am
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Thanks man
2466907 OK?
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i dont like your tone
there is no tone you are typing
Shut up you are just as worse as trolestia
2467922 what ever bro...hay do you here that....it's the sound of me not caring
It's a very nice story. I like it
It has it's downs here and there. but overall it got a nice plot
I'll be looking forwards for some more chapters.