2124709 Eh, to each their own, no judgement here, thank you for your review and feedback

I do hope you shall continue this story it is getting really good.

Well that escalated quickly.

make it awesome this while was a little ... lacking. anyway keep of good work

Awesome chapter, really liking the hate from all of Spike's former friends, makes good conflicts.

2125229 I will indeed Any thing you like the most from what you read so far or even dislike?

2126200 Was it that bad? I tried hard on it. Maybe I should have expanded the fight more?

2126417 Right Not sure if I read a fic where Spike's friends dislike him, at least I don't think

I was a bit confused on chapter 1 on why exactly Spike was so mad at Rarity, I can fully imagine why but everyponys reaction seems to be a bit severe for a drunken rant without some kind of insight into what happened between the two. This chapter felt a lot more fleshed out I think, however; I think Twilights confession was a bit premature. I do like Raindrops she seems like she is gonna be a real cool character.

2128968 For being rejected, all that hate and bending over backwards for love, treating a pony like a Goddess only to be backhoofed in the face that would make any creature tell another to go kill themselves, even more so if they were drunk. And hmmm.....maybe I should look over it again, thank you though bro, means a lot that you're so honest abut it. And I agree, I love Raindrops in this story

2133842 It's cool bro, take your time and you are thre second person to ask that.....I'l just go with he likes the flavor and it camls him down when he is stressed, I keep forgetting that smoking does not have any effect on a dragon damn it Plus, I could always see Spike having a smoke when he is older and I smoke myself so I like it

And here I thought Twilight was going to be shy about her feeling's, but an aggressive Twilight isn't a bad thing either. Damn with all the shit that went down in Ponyville, even with Twilight and Pinkie there, there doesn't really seem like there's any other reason to go back, cause the way I see it is that most of Spike's 'friends' hate him, other either don't like him, fear him or just don't want to be around him.
Maybe this would be a good time to look for a cave in the everfree or take the one on the mountain, lol. I'm laughing but kind of serious too. Being in Ponyville any longer sound's like it would just piss me off.

Other then that, good work you too, this story sure is full of conflict. Can't wait to see how this will play out, later.

Snips and Snails started the whole thing anway with callnig him a clumsy reptile, but Spike should have just ignored them and kept his cool which I know was difficult. Twilight or Pinkie which one does Spike love most?! Ooh, this is getting good, but I feel so bad for Spike in losing his once good friends such as Apple Bloom, Snips, Snails, etc.

I had a constant thought going through all of this, what if, when he is in front of the judge during his court date, he fully explains how ostracized he feels, even before either of the incidents. Explain how much hatred he feels just from the people around him, like they're looking for any excuse to kick him out of town. then go on and talk about the Rarity incident, and how he placed all the work he did, even being a pincushion and slave, just for a small smile towards him, only to find out YEARS LATER that it was never going to be given to him... saying that he was initially just going to let it go and never look her way again, the spiked punch encouraged his anger to surface, causing all but three mares in his life to hate everything about him: Pinkie, Twilight, and Applejack. Fluttershy still hated him, deeply, but can't express it in the way she would like to, deep down, being the element of generosity... ex...

then say something along the lines that when he does get exiled (because it's not a matter of 'if', it's a matter of 'when') he will tell everyone he can about the injustice of the pony race, the hatred they ensue against anything that isn't exactly like them, a Pony supremacy...

at least that's what went through my mind while reading it

2135717 Damn, now THAT is an amazing idea, shit, far better then my orginal Wow, you're smart my friend, very smart......wow that's just a great idea. Thank you very, very much

2135503 That is very true, and I was thinking of having him ignore them but then, well....you saw how that turned out. Sometimes something inside you just snaps, ha, you shall find out later And I agree, it is really sad, hoping to have him and Dinky repair their friendship maybe soon, can't wait to bring Raindrops in this again

2134424 I did not even know that about Twi until you said something bro though you are right, being in Ponyville when you're not wanted would make anyone become furious, think the only reason he is still there is because of Pinkie Pie.....though Twi may be another reason, you'll find out soon enough

2135825 not a problem... anything to see my favorite pony (Spike) portrayed in a good light...

can't wait to see what you'll do with it

2135897 Eh, good light, you must really not know who I am then But I'll try my very best, hoping not to disappoint you and other fans my friend

2135916 I meant it in the way that shows him like a actual sentient being, rather than just a slave, mindless assistant, baby dragon, or what have you... especially when he's the main character and it's showing his struggles and love... and yes, I have read most of your work, and have a number of them on my faves

2135947 That is something I can completely agree with, I can't write him as a twelve year old baby dragon like I think he is in the show, my mindset won't allow it And that's amazing, I had no clue I was so loved, thank you brother, that honestly means a lot to me

just one thing, we need more asshole punk Spike, A bitch fight between Pinkie and Twilight and your awesomeness in the next chapters!!!!!

Whoa!

Dinky not Derpy's daughter?!

That just might be a first for all of Fimfiction! I endorse!

“Who do I truly love more: Pinkie Pie… or Twilight Sparkle? And do I really see Twi as only family...or am I lying to cover my real thoughts from her....and myself?"

That's a good question indeed.

Spike seriously needs to leave Shitville. Spike did nothing but tell Whority the truth and he's the bad guy?

4043635 Oh, wait until you read the later chapters, it gets worse, MUCH worse.

And this story just went from interestingly harsh, to downright mean and weird.