A new stallion, who breathes pure darkness, coated in black steel and with a somewhat bad attitude arrived in Equestria three months ago, but The Princesses only learn of his presence now as he purposely shows himself for once.
Stormy, a pegasus new to Ponyville sports an unusual set of abilites explores deeper than anypony had gone in the Everfree Forest, but finds a horrible nightmare waiting to be set free.
OP characters/Mary Sues/Gary Sues really spoil everything.
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Just out of curiosity, which parts/characters come off as OP? Just wondering since the OCs in this fic are actually pretty new.