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Dear Princess

This is my first fan fic.

Twilight is now a very old pony, and is writing to the princess for the final time.

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Spooky

Spooky #1 · Feb 10th, 2013 · · ·

uuhh not again.... THE FEELS, IT HURTS

Usernotfound

Usernotfound #2 · Feb 10th, 2013 · · ·

Sorry, when i write a sad fic, i write a sad fic

Skarner

Skarner #3 · Feb 10th, 2013 · · ·

It would be a good idea to make an epilogue based on Celestia's reaction, twilight's funeral, and the next generation of the harmony holders

would be very interesting ^_^
but aside from that, quite a compelling story. thumbs up for sure!

Sagacity

Sagacity #4 · Feb 10th, 2013 · · ·

frist fan fic

writering to the princess

You need to learn to use spell-check.

Tellab

Tellab #5 · Feb 11th, 2013 · · ·

i have

i was a

Just a suggestion to capitalize and check punctuation and spelling. Overall I liked it though :) For a first it was great! I'm not an expert on fics of course but I personally liked it

Tellab

Tellab #6 · Feb 11th, 2013 · · ·

My life is now coming to an end. I know that. I have no idea when i shall go, to join my friends and the countless other ponys who are now gone. I want to tell you something. I shall always watch you. I shall always be there when times are rough. I shall be the one star in the sky that is the brightest, that small cloud in the sky and many more things you dont think of. I shall always be there, in your mind, in your heart.

BTW this made me get chills, this part was great :3

ChaoticHarmony