Coach and Louis from Left 4 Dead get trapped in Equestria. And the ponies seem to be taking it quite well to have two battered, covered in blood humans...Or do they? Meanwhile, back on Earth, the survivors have to find out what happened, and try to rescue their lost friends! But will they be able to get back? And, can the ponies stop the infection coming from the two, infected blood covered humans? (Warning: This story has cursing)
I wish the chapters were longer. But this is awesome so far, first l4d crossover I've seen
cool story, but it seems i am cursing myself. evry time i come up with an idea, i see a story about the same thing...
160049
Look at this, then.
Hah, that's the problem with the INTERNETZ! TO THE GAMERCAVE! *Hides for like 10 years playing Minecraft*
160130 i love that fanfic
FEAR NOT, FOR I SHALL LOVE THIS ONE AS WELL
I actually haven't read that one yet, gonna have to
A tactical shotgun? I think im liking the new Fluttershy
Tooo early and the last line saying what they can't be was forced otherwise good start
wait whoa whoa whoa why does fluttershy have loads of gunss thats a bit out of it...
In the story, previous survivors have guns because they asked her to store it.
What the fuck is going on?!?
I have no idea wats happening
bring it on u fucking 'roid raged freak
Fuken shotgun
Tis a bit rushed but sounds like a VERY good story is about to spring from the pages.
you might wanna make the chaps longer... half of the time im confused on what happened how is there infected and why did they land in equestria, ofc it might just be my sleepy brain......
where's the rest?
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum...
this is actualy a good story so far, keeping everyone in character. I think. I'm sorry, but it's a little hard to tell because of your pacing.
Use the "enter" and "indentation" key more often, okay?
This is what I said at Chapter 1. However, I found this fic around the time you uploaded chapter 5. Follow my advice, and you will have plenty of readers soon.
Goodbye updates.
Dude..... We need some fuckin' moar story here.
Your story makes my penis hard.
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