It has been one year since the Canterlot wedding, after feeling a deep empty hole in her heart Twilight receives news that her brother and Princess cadence are going to have a baby! Can Twilight handle the pressure? And when Queen Chrysalis exchanges the child for a changeling, raising it herself will anyone be able to melt the child's ice cold heart or will it be the end of Ponyville?
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A writer and an artist? You've got the complete package, there.
Anyway, I'm liking it, so far. It's a premise I never really thought of. Remember to start a new paragraph whenever someone new speaks.
Looking forward to Chapter 2.
Very, very impressive, I'm senseing some Spilight as well as some Futter Dash in this...hmm....I really enjoyed it, but you have to be sure to seprate when others are speaking, no matter how small, and be sure to double check your work before posting, Spike seemed to have disappeared and Rainbow seemed a small bit OCC, but over all not bad, a 8/10 really
I shall await more
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Sorry about that, and thank you I will take your advise. From what I have read not everyone spaces between every speaking part though. I don't want me story o be all one liners 
duely noted Next time, I will. I am glad you like it I was terrified of being thumbed down again. working on Chapter two as we speak 
Ack! Your right! Spike did disappear! I didn't even notice
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That's exactly what he said *points up*
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Sorry about that, and thank you I will take your advise. From what I have read not everyone spaces between every speaking part though. I don't want me story o be all one liners 
duely noted Next time, I will. I am glad you like it I was terrified of being thumbed down again. working on Chapter two as we speak 
Ack! Your right! Spike did disappear! I didn't even notice
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That's exactly what he said *points up*
Great story, looking forward to more!
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Thanks Nyan_cat
This is a really epic story can't wait for more!!! By the way I am Amber shadows from colors 3d!! Amber: " Hi Ember, how have you been?" Amber greets her friend.
Hmm, interesting. Meh, it was good so I fav and plan on reading more when I get the time.
Good chapter!