Page generated in 0.022 seconds
Total duration
980 users online
1,380,769 hits today, 2,073,628 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
So we have a nice little break from the action with this chapter to let characters interact and develop a bit, not to mention play some catch-up with a few ponies we haven't seen for awhile, and learn about our newest addition. Guess I'll start with the new guy, Wester. I like him, kind of get a Robocop vibe off of how he acts, more machine than organic, but I get that that's the point with him; he's lost a lot both due to his memory issue and being... well I'm assuming he's mostly cybernetic now? Not sure how much of him's power armor and how much is raw machine, but I'm guessing that ambiguity there is intentional. He's got a nice backstory with Lucy, though a part of me kind of wishes you'd just sort of hinted at that backstory with this chapter and then let us gradually learn more about his history with Lucy over time, maybe keep us guessing a bit and get little glimpses, and save the reveal for a heavy emotional moment down the road... but maybe that's just my own writing style talking, where I like to do things in little pieces like that. This was still pretty cool, and it was good to see that Lucy's got more to her than just a spunky attitude and harsh language; there's a softy under the fedora, even if she really doesn't like showing it.
Neo and Ally are a cute pair, and while it does put her in danger, I'm glad for story purposes that she's coming along now, as that'll give her a chance to shine, develop, and we'll see more of who she is and if her and Neo can get beyond the awkward embarrassment phase of their relationship. Oh, and the scene with the store owner was pretty amusing, I liked just how flustered and indignant that guy got over Neo's return, and just how much he'd apparently built up the notion of their epic bartering rematch.
So, next up Silvermare Tower. Well, actually, side-story next, but after that, Silvermare Tower! Wonder what they'll find? Mmm, the brother-duo dynamic was fun, but it's actually good for them to have a party of other ponies around now. I'm looking forward to it.
Red Glare is best pony...he should totally make the journey with them.
I love the refrences in the perk names. Also youve started writing Allie's name as Ally, why is that?