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Great chapter and i love that you incorperated a russian pony into the story
keep up the amazing work Noakwolf
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Thanks! Originally Iron Fist was supposed to be a dumb down Gaston-like character. However, before I stared writing him the idea of making him Russian was appealing to me. So, I went with it. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Ha, wondered if those two were going to show up again. Jib and Jab are a real pain in the flank because its not like they're a problem you can just shoot to get rid of. Well, you could, but that's not a path for more scrupulous heroes. This chapter was entertaining, though it didn't really push any plot elements forward. Still, I liked 'Da Fist', he was a simple character but enjoyable. Felt like Dual Shock needed a little... I don't know, something extra. I get why she was there, but we didn't learn much about her (I don't even recall if you described her coat and mane colors). Feels like how we got some character and background with Iron Fist we should have gotten a little more from Dual Shock as well, but she filled her role well enough.
Heh, you faked me out though at the start of this, making me think we were going to be getting some actual mech action; as in giant robots. Interesting term to use 'mech' as a colloquial phrase for mechanical limbs. Makes me think the region this story is taking place in has developed cyberlimbs moreso than other areas, to the point where slang terms have had reason to evolve, and that they're common enough for regular mechanics like Dual Shock to make a living.
Alright, so we got our main characters on a train and we'll see just what's waiting for them at the end of the line. If I recall they got a stop at Maneton then they walk the rest of the way to Silvermane...Maneton, gah, can't remember but they know ponies there as I recall. Brain won't give me details, dumb faulty memory.
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I will be honest, once I look back at it, I could have done a little more in terms of description. I'll have to look into it. Though, next chapter should be more story driven. I'm glad you liked it.
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Actually, we're a little farther than that. However, I'm not going to say much more than that. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!