Lyra Heartstrings and four of her friends have been burdened with the astronomical task of keeping Equestria's most powerful unicorn from causing a global disaster by posing as her best friends and maintaining the illusion that five of the Element Bearers never lost their lives in a tragic event.
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Interesting story, though the ending's a tad sudden and confusing. I probably just missed something though
2054016 I think she teleported up into space so that she could explode safely?
2054016 I'd have to go with terrycloth's assessment, but I agree that the ending is VERY abrupt, and in my opinion cuts the story off at the climax, no falling action, no resolution, just END. I would have liked to see this continued, but I don't know how that could be done.
I liked it though.
2054066 That's a bingo!
She realizes the danger that she is and decides to save Equestria from her madness by destroying herself.....commendable.
Very interesting concept. Have to agree that the ending is just too abrupt though.
Wish I could of found out what the whole story was behind the original mane 6 and why they are dead or something but other than that I like this
very interesting sudden ending though i can see potential
It's a god story but it needs a prequel explaining what happened to the previous elements. Good all in all I give it 3 derps and a mustache
What happens next?