Derpy Hooves happily delivers the mail to many ponies around Equestria, not knowing what some ponies actually think about her. A daily visit to the Wonderbolt Academy discourages her and a conversation she over hears between her friends makes her think she doesn't belong in Equestria anymore.
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Oh my...
I must warn you quickly, before the haters and trolls arrive.
Get rid of the paragraph walls!
I don't know what a paragraph wall is but when I find out I will correct it
Yeah, just add an extra line between each paragraph; it'll make it look more appealing. As for the content itself, beautiful
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Oh I got you. I just pasted from Word so I thought it superimposed it all the way it was written. And thanks
2033785 Ah, you copy and pasted from Word. Yeah, it doesn't automatically adjust it to the way it looks on Word. Quite inconvenient
What a powerful story. I really made me bad for Derpy and what she has to deal with everyday. I have to admit though, the style of the paragraphs did get a little distracting. But other than that, I really liked it.
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My eyes kinda teared during this story ;_;