After being pushed around for so long, Derpy is really getting tired of it. Then when Dr. Whooves pushes her a bit too far, she decides to push back. However, she'll come to realize she may have pushed too far herself.
Also a huge thank you to FlutterDash777 for helping me get motivated to start this :D
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Sounds more like Discorded Doctor to me. Seems very off character otherwise. Very well written piece though, can't wait to see more.
2029241Glad you liked it
and yeah the characters are a bit off but that's just how it came out. Sorry about that
Ima' beat you up if you don't continue!
Enjoyed seeing Derpy so aggressive. I would do the same thing if I were in her situation 
Great start!
Derpy being bullied when she was a kid...that's the same way I visualized her.
Please continue
2030892 No don't hurt me
I'm glad you liked it 
That means a lot coming from you 
2030900 Just keep up the good work, and I will definitely be watching out for more chapters
2030904
I'm glad to hear that
Looking foward to your next chapter!
2030963 I'm actually working on it right now
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Good
not bad! Oh. it's all in itallics- you probably forgot to end one with (I did that....rather annoying.)
2031580 Oh my!
I can't believe I didn't see that 
Thank you for pointing that out
2031614
No problem! I had that problem with a chapter of my story, so I completely understand!
A few people might comment how the Doctor is a bit OOC....and maybe that could be explained in future chapters? (it seems pushing the believability envelope that he'd start hitting a mail-mare just because of wrong mail...)
Just my two cents ^_^
2031655 Well I'm working on the second chapter right now, so I'll probably put something in there to try and explain it
2031686
Cool!
MAKE MOAR
2033798 I'll work on it more tomorrow
Glad you like what I've got so far 
I'm going to read this right now, and I swear, if it has Derpy go totally Pinkamena-Cupcakes on me, I'm going to do ... something ...
2033931
That's the funniest thing I've heard all week 
Now that I read it ... You better not turn this into Shipping/Clop or I'll have to kill you.
2034159 Well there is a romance tag
I can assure you there will be no clop however 
Wow this is getting cute
I like seeing the Doctors thoughts about Derpy's cuteness 
Makes me giggle 
Hope to see more soon 
2042516 Oh you will
Aww this was a nice ending
Very cute pairing, and nice story 
2090782
I'm really glad you liked it 
2090792 I can't wait to see more stories that you come up with
2090801
Just as soon as I can get some new ideas 
I love it! sequal?
DA FEELZ
=MEEEEEEEEEEEEELTED (I think derpy is cute too
)
2098389 Glad you liked it
Do I know this Doctor? I don't believe that I know this Doctor...
This chapter is filled with d'aaawwwwww
and i like it.
2176170 Glad you did
Very good start! Kudos my friend
Totally awesome story!