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Gherkin


I'm British. I write crossovers with that horse show you people like. That's about it.

Comments ( 18 )

surprisingly fantastic. also: dat ending.

followin'

Would've been interesting to see how Dash and Max's relationship would develop in New York with all the crap he's been through in his life.

Good until the ending. The noir style writing ran through fluidly, like gritty rain down a never washed tin gutter. For a brief moment, there was no dead wife, no washed up cop. There was harmony.

Then he totally took a spill and the pony ran off. The end. :fluttercry:

And that's how the real MLD happened too. He was just stoned off his ass for 15 years (or whatever number of years it was). :rainbowlaugh:

2018357 The ending was meant to imply that he had hallucinated the whole thing. The whole fic itself is a parody of the endless My Little Dashie spin offs.

Like he said, scotch and pills don't mix quite so well.

2018451 Kinda figured it was a parody when I saw the word 'box'.

Actually, I kinda expected that.

i read that all in Max's depressing voice damn you rockstar

That ending was awesome!:rainbowlaugh:

Didn't see that one coming.
Excellent work!

It's just funny cause I have a friend who's called Max and his second name is (get this) Payne :rainbowlaugh: I'm not making this up

2018803 good to see I'm not the only one to read this fic that way

Oh god... that orgasmic Max Payne voice...

God, I love Max Payne's voice. Nice concept.

*reads ending* :( I had I am Octavia playing in the backround because I was expecting newfound feels, WELL YOU CERTAINLY BITCH SLAPPED ME FOR NOT KNOWING ANYTHING ABOUT MAX PAYNE! NOW COME SO I CAN GIVE YOU THE SAME!:flutterrage: *calms down and relizes why* Maybe...maybe, you my friend, are always impressing me.

Max Payne is the best Rockstar Game character made, next to Trevor Philips.

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