Sunrise, Sunset: Lesson in Sensual.
written by overlord-flinx
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Underage my 'ARR'se! Luna is ancient! The 'similar' choices are either family, evil or insane which is hardly fitting for a fair lady.(Seriously though, some people in fanfiction complain about the age differences like it was a plague or something. That can't be healthy.)
EDIT: Hey, I got first post! Haven't done that in months! Also, I'm aware that it's Celestia here but she's basically doing a favor for her little sister so I'm still gonna have to wait on the 'good' stuff like everyone else.
Hmmm will check it out later.
Yep.
Whew, right from the description it looks like you might want to run this through an editor and post a revision. Title, actually. Putting it under "read later" for now.
Grady story so far, you got my attention.
Grady story so far, you got my attention.
Grady story so far, you got my attention.
Great *** I hate autocorrect.
Would smash Humanized Celestia.
Can't say the same for Luna... something missing.
Apparently no matter what story you write Flinx, it's always good.i2.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/small/000/219/814/100675%20-%20animated%20artist%253Amihaaaa%20clap%20luna.gif
2012443>>2012463>>2012482>>2012501>>2012624>>2012947>>2013607 Thank you all for your input. I hope I can muster a few more views and up-votes before the day ends.
Why do I get the feeling shit's about to hit the fan in the next chapter?
38 likes
2014172 That's good. But we can do better.
2014100
You make a lot of good stuff! You'll do fine.
I guess
2014100 I wanted to convey that I liked it, but I was dead tired when I read it. I had to re-read it this morning. The only thing I thought could be better, was that there could be more dialogue.
That lucky sunuva...
2014254 We'll do that next chapter.
Good enough for me to favorite! Good job! :)
Now go and rest our heroes.
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great for chapter 1
Sexy.
OK, so far I like it, but it needs a proofreader, as there are MANY grammar and spelling mistakes. (Too many to list) there are groups here that can help with that, IIRC. I'd do it, but I am busy.