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This a story were the ponies learn what a Brony really is. Its a funny story and has mild language. WARNING most of the ponies die. The story has not been edited on its grammer but try to ignor that and enjot it.
Also the story is fast paced.

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Comments ( 11 )

1. Post horribly constructed story
2. Announce that it is trollfic
3. Expect there to be solid results

I mean, seriously? My heart goes out to the poor pre-reader who had to screen this for approval.

p.s. it has bad grammar

Trollfics aims are traditionaly to... Well, troll.
If you tell us it's a troll fic, what the hell's the point?

Sorry but... No! :facehoof:

I know that you were trying to do a trollfic but this don't have any structure to be a troll fic. Also drop the Comedy Tag, there's no comedy on this just some of the most random text that I read on my entire life. And as you said, grammar is totally all over the place.

Atrocious. Lame troll 4/10.

lawlz... we def gotta work on out writing skillz

LOL i though it was funny
:rainbowlaugh:

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“Twilight where are we going oh… but if you don’t want to tell that’s fine

BECAUSE FUCK WAITING FOR A RESPONSE. THIS IS 2013, YOLO.

Oh don’t worry I’ve been there before it’s an awful place but awesome at the same time

Because descriptions are for pussies, LET'S USE A JUXTAPOSITION INSTEAD.

Greeting Twilight, Rainbowdash, Pinkiepie, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Applebloom, Scootaloo, and Sweetiebell

BECAUSE, WHEN GOING TO A POTENTIALLY LETHAL PLACE, ALWAYS REMEMBER TO BRING THE KIDS!

Hey Flutterbitch did I tell you to speak

My body is floating in a sea of I DON'T EVEN

Hmm… Hmm, oh sorry about that Luna and I were smoking a blunt before this

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it’s too bad this is what would bring them to their deaths.

BECAUSE WE DIDN'T NEED FORESHADOWING. AT ALL.

what is it princess, maybe me and the re…”
Tia gripped Applebloom and tore her head clean off

FATALITY

Twilight looked, disgusted at Tia, not because she was going to molest two small fillies, but because she wasn’t invited.

SILLY CELESTIA, THEY'RE VIRGINITIES ARE MINE.

Spike was the father of all the babies

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Everything went silent; until Rarity opened her purse she brought along, pulled out a gun and shot herself in face.

YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH. YOU CAN'T HANDLE IT YOU MARSHMELLOW PUSSY!

Its trap” shouted twilight to Tia, but twilight was had already been taken before she could even look at the princess.

BECAUSE THE BEST THINGS IN LIFE COME WITH FRESHLY SQUEEZED RAPE JUICE.
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So in conclusion: THE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABYTHE BABY

wow mr ignorable i cant tell if your hating or what but you really have no life if your going to spend 30 minutes writing a comment
when you wrote this comment i probably started and finished another fic

Most troll fics actually have decent grammar and spelling.

They also don't clearly say they are troll fics.

2009314

Mister, your post is more hilarious than the base story itself

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