My name is Lyra Heartstrings and I was accepted, with a full paid musical scholarship, into one of the most prestigious colleges in Equestria: Manehattan University. I am studying to major in classical music alongside my foalhood crush. Sounds great, right? Not really. The mare (yes, mare. I'm a fillyfooler.) is cold towards me, treating me as little more than a nuisance. Has since we were young. And she's straight. But I would do anything to be with her or just to have her like me. Not likely. Why must the universe torment me so?
Chapters (1)
Good job.
that cover art...
This is what happened with psp7master's Violet. It wasn't even up yet but he had the link and I read it. Can't believe it still hasn't been approved. It's been how long?
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That's it?
You've had the considerable expanses of your vocabulary and literary knowledge from years upon years of study and social interaction and exposure to media. You've got your mind that is infinitely large inwardly and filled with complex opinions and heart-felt thought delicately formed by your own stigma and emotional influence, and you can only reproduce your opinion in two words?
At least Squall used three words and an emoticon.
1999316 cause I am a big pony
(and my brain is fried from working on art today)
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*hugs*
Its interesting and I look forward to more.
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close too 3 hours
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Goddamn. Had I not been at the hospital, we probably coulda been half through chapter three.
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I've been sleeping *squee*
This story has more favorites than likes...
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So much for featured page....
2000654 Who needs the featured page when you have a half crazed artist like me around.
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When you see it though my eyes you'll see why it matters so much lock....
2000672 Hand them over and I'll take a look, while your at it you can use mine and look at all the work I have.
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*hands over eyes*please be careful
2000696 sorry but i.chzbgr.com/completestore/12/10/11/KELMlRIz3kKB6sKb5mWbCA2.jpg
with these eyes you gave me I think they're defective.
I love everything about this story but the little mistakes like almost etc. Please update this story as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mind pointing some out?
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Once I get over failing again I'll continue to write.
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Which means tomorrow or Wednesday.
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Yep pretty much
Nice story line so far I just love FP storys sometimes just yeah keep up the good work and thought process
Well I thoroughly enjoyed this. I default look forward to more. I'd suggest checking your grammar though, pretty sure I saw a their instead of a they're or something in there.
Still really enjoyed it.
Hmmm, shall be interesting to see where this goes, I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
I just wanna say; yay band! Also I am part of a rare species of human beings that is into all kinds of music.<-just something random
Finally, i love this story
Hmm, an interesting chapter and intriguing start to the story. Can't say that I've ever stumbled across a Lyra/Octavia fic before. If that's what this will even become, what with Octy being straight and all. I look forward to finding out. Also, you're getting moved off my Read Later list onto my favorites! Congratulation!
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Well there is a romance tag Isnt there. Strait Tavi should make an interesting conflict for the story no?
Well, I'm definitely interested and want to see where this goes, but it needs a lot of work.
EX: 'all most'
1 word.. 'almost'
When's the next possible update for this story?
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soon, finishing up the chapter as we speak
2024320 NOOOOOO THIS WAS AWESOME WHY DID YOU CANCEL IT???
2024320 Wait what happened to the second chapter of this? Did your editor get to it finally?
The anticipation is killing me! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!
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Once I get done with my depression I'll write, but until then I got other things to deal with at the moment
2372844 sorry to hear about your depression dude
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I'll survive, this has been going on since elementary school
2374943 So wait I'm confused did your editor get to the 2nd Chapter? Or did you just take it down?
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Still waiting....
2400183 I know how you feel my editor is suffering from allergies right now so my 2nd chapter for my story will take a bit, but as long as he gets it done soon I'm fine.
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I'm working on another story, but this story will get a chapter right after I get it up. I'm also going to go through and pretty up the first chapter
This is the Prologue for said story.