• Published 23rd Jan 2013
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The Invisible Mare - Thunderhalk89



Twilight accidentally turns herself invisible and, as a result, slowly begins to lose her mind.

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Epilogue


“Perhaps, it is time we retrieved Star Swirl’s old journal.” Celestia passed the letter on to her sister.

Luna enveloped the parchment in her blue starlit aura, eyeing her older sister. “Why? Do you really think that she is ready for such a task?”

“No, she is not ready yet. She still has much to learn. She now knows to believe in her friends, and that she can always count on them. We now just need to wait and see if she can put it into practice. It will be the only way to be certain that she can reverse the spell.”

Celestia suppressed a chuckle as her sister almost dropped the scroll she had passed to her as she became aware of the second, much longer scroll that had accompanied Twilight’s latest friendship report.

“What is wrong with the Chameleon-spell’s title? I thought it was rather fitting.” She looked to her sister quizzically after skimming the curious attachment.

“She seems to think that it is misleading and promotes the belief that chameleons change color to match their surroundings.”

“That is why I liked it: it was funny. Everypony got a chuckle out of it.”

“That is another thing that that has changed over the years, Lu-Lu,” the older sister answered with a smile.

“They no longer think it funny, Tia.” The younger asked, jovially using her own pet name for her sister.

“They take it as fact.”

“Oh. Then, perhaps we should consider reevaluating the education system. I am finding that not many ponies know how to use an abacus anymore either. More ponies should know how to use an abacus.”

Both sisters laughed as one moved her orb, giving the sky to the other.

Comments ( 5 )

Love it! :pinkiesmile:

2546503
:twilightsheepish: She totally meant to do that... yea... It was meant to be an example as to why you should never attempt to proof-read after only 3 hours of sleep. (that makes sense, right?)
In all seriousness:
Thanks for the heads up. It's fixed now. If you or anyone spots any other grammar or spelling issues, don't be afraid to let me know.

2538970>>2544681
Glad you liked it.

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Any and all criticisms and critiques are welcomed. This is probably the first story (other than school assignments) that I have actually finished. "Yay!" for accomplishments.

8474847 Was that comment really from 4 years ago? Wow time really does fly.

8475511
Eeyup! And I completed this story in one day.

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