Tomorrow Never Comes

They'll ultimately fail, perhaps, but a star-gazing pegasus and his unicorn friend aren't about to let Princess Luna descend into madness easily.

This will probably only be in two parts, though I may add a companion story at some point.

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#1 · Sep 18th, 2011 · · ·

pretty good. read lunacy for ideas, cause lunacy is awesome. but so's your story.
I will be back for chapter 2.

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Tequila Sunrise #2 · Sep 19th, 2011 · · ·

5168 Thanks! Hopefully it won't take me too long to get part 2 done up here, though I admit I haven't made that much progress so far. I will finish it, though!

#3 · Oct 2nd, 2011 · · ·

I'm suprized this did not get more reviews, it was well written and had a solid plot (shut up not like that).
all in all i thought it was interesting and enjoyable to read. obviously.

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Tequila Sunrise #4 · Oct 2nd, 2011 · · ·

8369 Yeah, I think someone hit me with a 1 pretty early, which is a bummer. Glad you're enjoying the story!

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Karrakaz #5 · Dec 6th, 2011 · · ·

pfeh! we'll get more people in here yet, i for one loved the way the story's turning out sofar, there's just one thing i dread.... which is the way i know it's going to end.

i can't stand sadness

keep up the great writing though

#6 · Dec 6th, 2011 · · ·

I'll be back.

Also, /story/777 nice!

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Tequila Sunrise #7 · Dec 6th, 2011 · · ·

54381 Thanks! And alas, it will end sadly, but hopefully in an interesting manner, at least. I feel a bit bad that I haven't posted the second part yet, but I went back to the first part and spruced it up a bit so I'm intending to repost it in its entirety at some point in the not-too-distant future.

The update won't change the plot significantly, but there were parts where I wasn't wild about my word choice and so on.

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