Rarity shook her head. "Um, sorry darling, I think I heard you wrong. May you repeat that once more for me?"
"...Twilight...?" Fluttershy said timidly.
"T-twilight?" Rarity blinked. She let go of her friends hair and stood up, rubbing her temples. "Now Rarity, you mustn't have a horse in front of your weeping friend." Rarity mumbled to herself.
"What did you say Rarity?" Asked Fluttershy.
"Um...nothing dear. Just talking to myself."
"Oh, alright." Said the yellow pegasus laying down.
Rarity felt tears coming in. She couldn't help it, she was the most dramatic pony in Ponyville for Celestia's sake! Even she knew it.
"Bu-but, I love Twilight too!" Screamed Rarity by accident.
"What?" Asked Fluttershy, tearing up yet again.
"Oh! Uh, ignore what I just said." Rarity said, turning around to Fluttershy
But she was already gone.
"Why does everypony have to love Twilight? I-I-I LOVED HER BEFORE ANYPONY ELSE!" Screamed Fluttershy, running back home with tears streaming down her face.
Back at the restaurant, Twilight and Pinkie had just gotten their appetizers.
"Mmm, these pizza rolls are good." Said Twilight. "I just can't get enough of them!" As Twilight took another pizza roll from the platter, gooey cheese dripped down onto her chin.
Pinkie looked at Twilight's chin and giggled. "Here, let me get that for ya." Pinkie said, leaning across the small wooden table, proceeding by licking the tasty cheese off her chin. Then licking her lips and smiling widely at Twilight.
"Uh-um.." Twilight looked around her table, making sure nopony saw what had just happened.
Pinkie just sat there smiling at the nervous mare.
"Um, why did you lick me?"
"Just cleaning your face, silly! What else?"
"Oh, well- never mind." Twilight said, blushing, then looking back down to the pizza rolls.
Pinkie watched Twilight. She was so beautiful. She's the most adorable pony I know Thought Pinkie in her dream land, imagining kissing Twilight. Beatiful-
"Hello, I'm Cherry Slice, and I'll be your waitress tonight. Have you two figured out what you'd like to eat?"
"Yes, I'd like the dandelion quiche." Said Twilight
"Okay, and you?" The waitress said smiling.
"Two creme broule's, and shrimp jambalaya, please!"
Twilight giggled at Pinkies choice for ''dinner''.
Rarity sank down onto her couch crying. She just made her best friend cry, and her crush since last summer sun's celebration was dating one of her friends.
Rainbow Dash beat her to Twilight.
Just thinking about it made her want to throw up.
"SWEETIE BELLE!?" Rarity Yelled, making the entire house shake.
"Coming!" Sweetie Belle yelled, trotting down the stairs.
When she saw her sister crying, she rushed to her side.
"What's wrong, sis?" Sweetie hugged her sister tightly.
"EVERYTHING'S HORRIBLE!" Yelled rarity, shaking the house once again, knocking Opalescence off where she was sitting.
"Is there anything I can do?" Asked Sweetie Belle pleadingly.
"M-make me some tea, please? Earl Gray, and make sure it's the loose leaf tea." Rarity said, pausing her sobbing to make sure Sweetie Belle got her tea right, then bawling right after she had finished talking.
"Yes ma'am." Said Sweetie Belle, saluting her sister, then rushing to the kitchen to get her tea ready.
After the tea finished boiling in the kettle, the white filly brought her sister the steaming hot drink and sat down to listen to her ramblings.
"I've had a crush on Twilight for years! Rainbow Dash probably only started liking her this month! Why does Rainbow get everything she wants? It's not fa-a-air!" Screamed Rarity.
As Rarity was letting her emotions out, her sister was ignoring her, the first word she said was now etched inside her head.
What if me and the girls make a love potion for Twilight and Rarity, like with Miss. Cheerilee and Big Macintosh!? Thought Sweetie Belle, excited to make her sister happy.
2010930 Eh, sorry. I haven't written in so long. This story might be my comeback I hope it gets better for you!
Sweetie Belle must be some kind of genius. Nopony else would ever think to take an inherently flawed plan, that was universally hated and had the potential to destroy everypony's way of life forever, and try it again without changing anything. It's perfect!
2011119 Silly Sweetie Belle!
Twinkie for the win. Or Twishy. Great job so far! Still, the only issue is grammar. I like it a lot, though! I can't wait to see what happens next!
2011205 I'm not even sure yet. But I'm rooting for Fluttershy too!
well crap, i've always been partial to a twidash pairing. anyway, good job on the story, but maybe you should put those little transition things other authors use when you switch between characters? just an idea.
2011348 Will do. Thanks for the input
2011358
no prob.
It's not fa-a-air!
You could use this. It's correct in grammar (pretty sure) and it makes a good show of the fact shes crying.
2011119
......
Isn't trying the exact same thing multiple times and hoping for a different outcome the "definition of insanity"?
2011223
I vote for herd ending!
Twilight x rest of Mane 6
2011392 Hehe, maybe that'll happen? Nopony knows
2011392 Done. Thanks, bro.
2011415
lol you responded to my herd ending comment instead of my grammar one. lol
2011415
Also it still says
It's not fa-a-air!
need that "NOT"
2011457 I saw the twilight x mane 6 comment first
2011496
yeah, or sometimes they make the title of the book into those shortened versions (like the cutie mark crusaders is referred to as the CMC) and then put symbols around it to make it look cool. i'll see if i can find a good example from one of the other stories i have saved.
2011517 Hehe, okay. Take your time
2011119 I know right, it's like "CUTIE MARK CRUSADER LIFE RUINERS, YAY!"... OR SOMETHING.
2011496
like this! ~MC~MC~MC~. just something that looks neat that signify's the transition from character to character.
2011496
Their called Line Breaks
In this it is done by typing
[ H R ]
Without spaces.
you could also do some other styles
~~~~
~~*~~
and so on and so forth
2011530 Thanks. I'm an idiot
2011547
Nah with this your now a writer....Not much difference when it comes to some people but i'm also guessing you're new to the site (or at least to formatting stories) so then it makes sense.
2011556 Yeah. Thanks, you're a great help!
2011565
No prob man. If you want actually i'd be willing to proof read your stuff before you put it out here if you would like me to.
2011589 Yo, that'd be awesome! Thanks /)
2011595
No Prob. Just send me the chapter through a PM (Message) and I'll take a look at it as soon as I can.
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I'll also go through the first two a little before I hit the hay here.
2011603 Okay! Thanks, again!
A love potion for Twilight in order to have her fall in love with Rarity? I fail to see how that can possibly go wrong,hell it worked out perfectly the first time with Big Mac and Cherilee
P.S:Since Twinkie is my OTP,i am hoping those two get together.
I absolutely love this although I haven't seen any updates in a pretty long time. Will there be any more chapters?
(Rooting for TwiDash. Have been ever since I read 'Building Bridges' <3)
I say again. Ponies cannot digest meat.
Knocking her...What?
Dunno If you added this after or I was tried and missed it. Sorry if it's the latter.
2054433 not only can they not diggest it but also PinkieĀ“s many friends ARE meat
2054437 out of where she was sitting